Great build for a first one! I used to be really into this stuff. You can tell by looking in my Bionicle folder *hint, hint* ;) Nice work! I also added you as a favorite and take a look at my homepage, I think you'll like the new addition.
Okay -Takes breath- Very nice first Bio MOC. I like that staff and shield, it's not a combination of blades I would have thought of. While it is small, I can see this growing into something larger. I have to say, those are clever legs. People don't often associate Mata Torso with Vahki legs. Nice. It needs some work though, but it looks nice.