A little advice on taking pictures. Make sure your pictures aren't fuzzy, prop your camera up on a book or something. Next is your background. A dirty table doesn't quite "do it" for the MOC. Trust me I know, I used to do the same thing four years ago. Try to get a clean sheet, and spread it on a table, and pin it to the wall or whatever. Then get some lamps for proper lighting. Proper lighting helps to bring out the details in the MOC. A dark picture barely shows anything.
Good work, but it looks like it could use a bit of rounding off at the edges. :)
Also, Could you please judge Round 5 in the ALO? Sorry if I'm a bother, I'm just getting pretty anxious. :/ Here's a link to the group: http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/22185