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Bio Cup 2013, R1/Entry Round:





















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 I like it 
  July 2, 2013
Very well built and compact design! It lacks personality though, so I'll grant you a 7.
 I like it 
  July 1, 2013
Nice. Is well built and the design flows well. I like the stubby, almost dwarvish, aspect of it, although the arms could have benefitted from a little extra lenght. Also, I like the different shades of silver, they add color without really adding color, in a way. Here goes an 8.
  July 1, 2013
Quoting Toa Arzaki I don't think it says anywhere that Torak is a Toa of Air. Just because he/she has a Miru, does not mean he/she is a Toa of Air.
It was written in the description before, but Jazz removed it. And yes, a Miru does not a Le-Toa make... but some people seem to think so.
 I like it 
  June 30, 2013
Great build, lots of little technical details to keep a number of areas interesting. Stocky character, feels very immovable though, so how poseable is this MOC? Also, I believe that hand design should have been sufficient enough to hold a sword of that size without needing to remove his pinky. Five fingered hands though, don't see them very often. You get a 7, enjoy it. :)
 I like it 
  June 28, 2013
I don't think it says anywhere that Torak is a Toa of Air. Just because he/she has a Miru, does not mean he/she is a Toa of Air.
 I like it 
  June 28, 2013
Fantastic Bionicle! The colors match nicely, but for a Toa of air they're a bit off... Good luck!
 I like it 
  June 26, 2013
Very nice. The colors are well balanced, structure well designed and visual appeal great. Not visually stunning though, black and silver is so common that it's not sufficient enough to make a visual impression. The pictures nor the designs from afar show much posability for him either. 90 degree bends are fine, but are they enough? This is a strong entry though, 7 points.
 I like it 
  June 26, 2013
This is another sturdy-and-strong looking build; great use of truncated limbs (and commitment to Size Constraint) to pull that off. I would have liked to see a little greeble filling in the BACK of the head a little, but am still pleased by the way the rest of the body makes up for it. Good accessory size-match for the figure, nice colors. 7 points!
 I like it 
  June 25, 2013
Very compact and technically impressive. The color distribution is so perfect you can actually appreciate the darker shade of silver on its chest and mask. You can tell the kind of personality you imagined for him just by the design, which where it's not very imaginative, is certainly effective. The page suffers a bit from the lack of a description and the top-down pictures that make Torak look like a midget. It could also use some more action and epic poses, but still, 7 points. Well done.
  June 25, 2013
Ah, the neck looks a lot better. Not sure about the hands though. Or the fact that he's a Toa of Air, I think Magnetism or Sonics would be more fitting for the color scheme.
 I made it 
  June 25, 2013
Fixed the neck, gave him five-fingered hands.
  June 24, 2013
Nice! Better than mine! I like the detail in the lower legs and the armor in the arms. Keep up the good work. No thumb, though.
  June 24, 2013
Quoting Smooth Jazz Anyway, I've moved the neck back one length. Should I re-post?
You can if you want. I assume it'll look better with this new edit, so sure. :P
 I like it 
  June 24, 2013
Fairly nice moc, I may suggest putting the neck back a bit, it seems to stick out quite a lot. Good luck.
 I like it 
  June 24, 2013
Just change pictures. Btw. You didn't name him Rolf. :(
 I made it 
  June 24, 2013
Anyway, I've moved the neck back one length. Should I re-post?
Smooth Jazz
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Sage Clouston
  June 23, 2013
Very well done! I find odd how my entry uses the exact same colour scheme and front armor for the torso, though. :P
  June 23, 2013
Eh... Yuri's inconsistent. Called it round one, then called it round zero... anyway, don't forget to put this in the entry thread! :P
 I made it 
  June 23, 2013
Quoting [ Chro ] Nice build! Not sure about the neck hunch thing, but cool anyway. BTW this is round zero, the entry round, not round one. ;)
Actually, though it is the entry round, it is also round 1: http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=22700&topicid=89959 Anyway, thanks! About the neck hunch, it looks too high to me as it is.
 I like it 
  June 23, 2013
Nice build! Not sure about the neck hunch thing, but cool anyway. BTW this is round zero, the entry round, not round one. ;)
 I like it 
  June 23, 2013
This is awesome! The torso and leg designs really stand out to me. I'm no judge but I think you're sure to advance. Best of luck in the contest!
 I like it 
  June 23, 2013
This is awesome! The torso and leg designs really stand out to me. I'm no judge but I think you're sure to advance. Best of luck in the contest!
 
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