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Notice: Intentional dark pictures to add to the story and autoplaying music.
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A young dragoness walks among the forest and sees the ancient ruins of once a glorious city. The dragoness, lost, helpless, alone, has no place to go and wanders deeper into the city. Her family was killed. She can hardly forget the events and looking behind as she was told to run away by her mother... "Athana, save yourself!" Those were her last words...

Athana wandered deeper into the city...



Is there any sign of life? Athana looked around at the gloriously carved dark stone the city was made of. The walls and pillars stood as high as a hill, firm, feeling nigh eternal. The old scriptures remain still clear, covered in foliage, or in pieces as some of the walls and pillars had crumbled. The devastation had taken its toll after The Arising, when a group of dragons turned against their own kind. The elements went rogue as the balance of Phaisea shook, destroying many homes, many lives and many memories...

Athana looked around in hope of finding something of significance, and possibly a shelter. It was getting dark quick and the night was no longer safe. She was sad and confused. She hardly recalled what was the cause of all this. She thought her family would've been safe and lived a normal life, but still they were lost... Everything comes to an end, but not this quick, no... Her brother was so young...

Athana came up to a large gate. The huge structure at the center of the city must've been the elemental temple. That was confirmed as she looked up and saw the stream of shadow, weak and scattering around which is not normal...

The door had a gap. This would make a fine shelter and perhaps reveal history to her. She entered the structure.

She was tired. The sun had set and she could hardly see inside the temple. There was only a grim blue light at what seemed to have once been the well of shadow, where the element once streamed steadily towards the skies. Now the stream was oddly slow and weak. She sat down before it. She looked down and shed a tear for everything that's happened. Yet she didn't know that she was being watched...

As she looked behind her she saw a pair of red eyes in the darkness, crawling towards her. What was this beast? She got alarmed and slowly backed away from the creature and towards the altar. As the creature closed towards her, Athana could begin to see the beasts features: a dark long body, sharp claws, a reptilian head... Then the beast charged.

Athana quickly backed away on the altar, but the floor beneath her gave away. She fell into the depths and at the last stroke managed to soften her landing by furiously flapping her wings. She had no idea where she was at and it was near pitch black, as she could hardly see the features of a stonewall in front of her. She was stuck and had no strength to fly, nor was she strong enough to fly so high yet. She would have to wait...



















...and she didn't have to wait for long...

To be continued...

This is Fallen Elements, my new storyarch that takes place 7000 years in the future of the Elemental Universe. A lot has changed in such time and the once glorious peace didn't last forever. Now the elemental streams have gone out of control, and have reshapen the lands into something else than it once was...

Meet Athana, the young dragoness, who I built by the desire to create a miniature dragon. The torso has two points of articulation and the wings move quite freely, so this figure is quite posable for the small size. I was a bit lazy show that though. The tail needs improving also.

The last image is a bit of a sneak peak, but you'll see what it is and what'll happen next eventually...

Thanks for looking.




Comments

 I like it 
  August 22, 2013
Nice! Bears a bit of a resemblance to Cynder from legend of spyro. Oh man, you made me want to write a fanfic to tie this character into the established legend of spyro canon XD!
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  July 2, 2013
That's amazing o_O it looks awesome!
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  July 2, 2013
Well, this is interesting ! Cute yet fearsome looking. The build and choices of pieces was clever, especially the flow of hand connectors for the "chubby" arms. I must say, that head design is seriously outstanding and really well done ! :D BTW, I really love how you made the hind legs.
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  June 30, 2013
I've gotta say, he's so cute! He reminds me of the dragon from the movie, "How to train a dragon."
 I like it 
  June 30, 2013
Actually, the dragon looks cute. 5/5
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  June 30, 2013
So cool! Can't wait to see what happens next!
  June 30, 2013
reminds me of spyro. those hind legs are great btw.
  June 29, 2013
Amazing! I want more story! The build is great, too. Love those tooth pieces. It makes me want to build a dragon.
 I like it 
  June 29, 2013
I'm a sucker for cute little dragons, and this is one cute little dragon!
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  June 29, 2013
So cute, and very well designed! Great job, it looks awesome! :D
 I like it 
  June 29, 2013
Great build - so cute!
 I like it 
  June 29, 2013
Love dragons!
 I like it 
  June 29, 2013
What a great little MOC. It has a lot of nice flow to it and it appears to look rather smooth even though it is all black and in the dark.
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  June 29, 2013
Aww... Man, this is the best moc I've seen in awhile. It's just so original and cute, and amazingly well designed. It's these builds that remind me why you won the Bio-Cup. :)
 I like it 
  June 29, 2013
Cool! I reminds me of Toothless from How to Train Your Dragon. Do you think you could check this and my self MOC out when you get a chance http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/363400
 I like it 
  June 29, 2013
Reading that with the music, so worth it. Love the music on this,, great job on the moc! Love what you got here!
 I like it 
  June 29, 2013
Didn't read story cuz I'm in a rush... BUT THAT HAS TO BE THE CUTEST MOC EVAARRRR! /)*3*(
 
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