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Sword Maiden
If the Order would kill someone for something they can't change I want no part of it. -Darna to Helryx the day after Spirit escaped death.
About this creation
Name: Darna
Race: Matoran
Species: Ga-Matoran
Kanohi: Faxon
Powers: Power over water, Minor control over air and the green
Weapons: khopesh

Darna was shocked when Spirit changed but it quickly turned to rage when Helryx ordered him dead. Why should she judge him just on what he is not what he had done. Helryx would kill him for something he couldn't help and that was a shame. So she started to move to help him noticing Carst and Carrion moving to do the same. They all froze when they saw him look sadly at them and dive through the window. She dropped her sword and fell to her knees in half shock half prayer he would live. The next day she, Carrion and Carst left the order and decided to split up and search for their friend. But after a long time searching she and Carst gave up. They told Carrion he should too but he said he wouldn't stop till he found either his brother or his body. For Darna priority changed to revenge. She attacked several order members seriously inuring them and then a makuta approached her. He offered to give her the power to achieve her vengeance. She accepted and the makuta ran her through with his sword. After he had removed his blade the wound healed and Darna began to change. Parts of her armor turned green and she gained some control over air and the green. Then the carnage started. One member of the order died a week later from suffocation and another was found in the nearby forest hung by a vine. Then Darna disappeared.



Five years later...
Darna had heard that the imposter was in the area. She would make him pay for mocking her friend. She saw him ahead. He did look like Spirit she had to admit, but she knew Spirit was dead. She drew her blade and shouted "You dishonor a good man's name and I will make you pay." The imposter stood shocked and said "Darna? What are you talking about? Its me Spirit!" "LIAR!" she shouted and charged. "Spirit" whipped the sword off his back revealing it to be a gun blade similar to her friend's. He blocked the strike and they both stumbled back.



Then Carrion showed up between them and shouted for them to stop. Darna told him to move so she could kill this imposter posing as Spirit and he didn't. He told her that this was Spirit and she should stop. She lashed out at him to knock him out of the way but he caught the blow on his shield. We are going to talk now so drop the sword.



She considered the odds and decided. Alright we'll talk, but if you don't prove its him I'm going to kill him. Spirit let out an exasperated sigh and Carrion after shooting him a glare nodded.



Spirit told his story and Carrion told her of the proof. Prime example being the makers mark on the blade. It was the only gun blade Spirit had made and he had hidden it well. Then when he changed into a toa it appeared on his back. She asked to see it and noticed the makers mark. It was Spirit's mark alright so this was either his blade or an expert forgery. She turned and fired it at a rock and since she had fired the blade once before and this was the same. No one could copy its firing because that was Spirits secret which he never revealed. He would also never have let the blade fall into the wrong hands. So she checked one other thing. There on the end of the pommel was the hidden button that would lock the sword and prevent the gun from ever being used and also scramble the wires and parts so they couldn't be reproduced.



That proved it to her. Dropping the blade she ran and hugged the friend she had long thought dead. He was shocked because she had never done that before and he didn't expect it. Carrion waited for her and when she finally released Spirit he said that they needed to move on and find Carst. She nodded and grabbed her weapon and tossed Spirit his.



Together again the three friends set off after their forth member...
To Be Continued

4th wall breeching
Well first credit for Darna's design goes to Vorred 03. After several attempts at a revamp I saw his moc Vastara and decided that Darna should look like that. So with some difficulty I managed to replicate the body, arms and feet. I added my own color scheme of blue and green which looks pretty good in my opinion.



The Sword is actually a real kind of weapon used by ancient Egyptians. The khopesh was designed to hook an enemy's weapon and disarm him. Darna earned her nick-name Sword Maiden because she was the best with this weapon and won every sword bout she got into.



Her arms can cross and move better than Spirit's can.



A picture of her back. Before you say anything about the red ball joints they were all I had. So if you're going to complain on something it better not be them because I had no other option.



Last shot of her waving goodbye. Thanks for looking and see you next MOC :)



Comments

 I made it 
  May 4, 2014
Quoting Chalk33, Ruler of Chalka Magna Very nice MOC! Great story as well. And I know how you feel about the ball joints ;P.
Thanks Chalk33 :) Yeah those ball joints. I hopefully will be revamping this soon and It won't have those red ones. Thanks for looking man :)
 I like it 
  May 4, 2014
Very nice MOC! Great story as well. And I know how you feel about the ball joints ;P.
 I made it 
  December 3, 2013
Quoting Commander Spencer, Ultimate Bionicle Fan Looks like a Hahli revamp to me, no offense.
Didn't have a lot of choices on the mask man. Got more parts now so I'll be re-revamping this moc :)
 I like it 
  December 1, 2013
Looks like a Hahli revamp to me, no offense.
 
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