Just saying, this is by far the sturdiest Bio-guy I've made yet.
I present to you...Deaskuth, successor of Seerox. This is my new Self-MOC; I'm abandoning Seerox, this guy is SO much cooler, in my opinion. So, to the story:
Deaskuth kicked a rock out of his way as he stumbled through the barren deserts of Bara Magna. Dead! Seerox was DEAD! Deakuth couldn't believe the shock. His partner, his closest friend, was gone forever. Wiped out. The Legend of the Universe, the being who had never lost a battle, had been killed by a single foe. That name still ran through Deaskuth's ears: Artaxias. The being who had killed his friend. Deaskuth shook in rage. He wanted - he needed revenge.
His answer would come soon...
Full body shot.
This arm is meant to be disproportional.
Back. Urgh. Blue pins annoy me.
Torso! I love this so much!
In all its glory. Plus, it has a Heartlight! :D
Deaskuth: Bye, guys! Hope you like me! God bless!
Quoting [ Chro ]
Very nice build, I'll judge it once Garrett posts his. Just saying, I really dislike when people use a canon character as their self-MOC.
Sorry, I've never heard that expression. If "Canon Character" means a character that's already been used, that was not intentional, and I was going to change it today. Thanks for the comment, though, Chro.
The torso's kinda neat. If the front armor covered the head a bit more, and if the shoulders were closer to the body, and if you made a different leg design, and make the shoulders not-mismatched, it would be a pretty neat MOC. You could also change all the red pins to black, that would also improve the design of the MOC. Also, try not to use the Avohkii, it's been used a great deal too many times, and this MOC would look much better with a different mask. P.S, not sure if you were intentionally referring to this, but Defilak is an actual Bionicle character. If you wanted to make a truly original character, I'd suggest changing the name to something similar.