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LOM Persuasion Challenge: The Need
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Builder's Note: Ah another challenge it seems? Huzzah! Well now I can get enough points to build my citizen challenge soon! Also the text shows each picture below it! Well enjoy my entry! Oh yeah the Thread here!

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Orc,"Uh! Almost got it...."



Grenber," Sir your under arrest."



He quickly called in a guard to get the thief
Guard,"Put down your knife and get off the bed!"



The orc threw his knife and put his hands in the air. "Ah you fools...."He muttered out



Guard," So your the guy whos been stealing my bread buns from my room!"
Orc,"Gotta eat sometimes...." With that the guard escorted the thief out, while Orin came in to see what was happening.



Orin,"That orc has probably been here for weeks stealing people's possessions and valuables."



Grenber,"Yes I believe so, at least Matthew's and other people's things are safe now."



Grenber,"Nothing is safe anymore."



*Meanwhile*

I arrived at the Blacksmiths shop soon after the talk with Grenber and Orin, I had already enlisted a couple of men to help with the taking of that outpost. I just need more weapons for our assault. Mainly Swords....



I entered the building with many people inside. I had to find the Blacksmith here. Where are you...?



There he is!



I slowly tried to get past some of the men, they looked like they were carrying some weapons.





As I was about to get to the blacksmith, a woman moved in front of me. "Sorry." I said trying to get around her.



I side stepped to let her pass. Finally...people these days.



Me,"Um hello sir. I..I am Matthew of Tomeu."



Blacksmith,"Hello there son! I am Harry, the blacksmith here as well as owner, what can I do for ya?"



Me,"Ha yes, I have talked to Grenber here and I am repaying him with, taking back an old outpost held by rebels. I would like to get a batch of swords for my men."



Harry,"Lad, I just had my men put out the last batch of weapons for the month, you'll have to wait till later for some."



The end of the month! I don't have time for that! "Sir, I need them now!" I said



Harry," Well...what did you need them for? That outpost right?"



Me,"Yes sir, I need them for my men. Please Harry!"



Harry,"Let me think."



Me,"I'll return them if I can.....I just need them, this once."



Me,"I promise."



Harry sighed. I could see he wanted to help but also needed them for other people.



Harry," Deals off with those other people, you can have those weapons. But I need you to promise me something else..."



Me,"Thank you!" Yes whatever you want."



He put his arm on my shoulder and said,"Keep all your men alive, return them home....safely."



"I will."




EDIT

Outpost here for my citizen challenge. Its very small, and I mean small, dont mind the 100 yards thing. I need it small so it wont be like a city attack



We will get a log to break down thier small gate. Also Thatch, you can attack any side of the wall, my idea was breaking down part of the wall on one side.



Where I'll make a good stand to gain the outpost control.



Here is what the gate will look like but a lot smaller and wooden.



Here is the outpost =)





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Woof! Not much to say here but, that was fun, yuss! I can now do my Citizen mission! Thanks for looking!




Comments

 I like it 
  August 19, 2013
Very nice!
 I made it 
  August 8, 2013
Quoting George Marshall Looks great! Are we all going to meet up on the mountains before the attack, or just you two? And once you post the letter-sending, I can start on the chain of MOCs leading up to the attack! When you do post it, is there anyway you could write the letter on the MOC? It would help me out a lot, and I am going to make my receiving the letter the "Persuasion Challenge" MOC, so could you make the letter a bit persuading? Thanks!
Ok sorry I ended up spending the night at someones house and I didn't post but that's kinda good. I'll try to put the letter in there with a persuasive note, and it's only me and Thatch in the mountains. I am gonna be posting a free-build of that scene as well as the letter.
 I like it 
  August 7, 2013
Looks great! Are we all going to meet up on the mountains before the attack, or just you two? And once you post the letter-sending, I can start on the chain of MOCs leading up to the attack! When you do post it, is there anyway you could write the letter on the MOC? It would help me out a lot, and I am going to make my receiving the letter the "Persuasion Challenge" MOC, so could you make the letter a bit persuading? Thanks!
 I made it 
  August 6, 2013
Quoting Thatch Gears
Awesome! It's also here on the page, just in case I forget =)
 I like it 
  August 6, 2013
Very nice! Isaak will have a friend with him, so maybe he can lend his.. 'skills' per-say. Anywho, You'll make the MOC with your character meeting mine on the other side of the mountains, and then I'll attack a wall, like you said, so that your MOC and mine don't intercede, just happen in the same space. Got it memorized?
 I like it 
  August 5, 2013
Nice persuasion!
 I like it 
  August 5, 2013
Nice build! :D
 I like it 
  August 5, 2013
A nice, solid, and clean build. Very sharp pictures, too! In the future I would choose to post an overview shot of the whole MOC, but it's up to you. Anyway, excellent work!
 I like it 
  August 5, 2013
Awesome! I love all the detailing on the forge!
 I like it 
  August 4, 2013
Cool moc! Although, I think he was a bit to easily swayed. Generally these folk are a bit harder to budge.
 I made it 
  August 4, 2013
Quoting Stephen Boe
Thanks, I thought it was ok that I pleaded. I also have to return the weapons, as well as the men going with me!
  August 4, 2013
Great builds! I just felt like the guy wasn't very persausive. It was more like a child saying "Please mommy! Please! I begs you!" But you still did I good job!p, nonetheless!
 
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