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Uriel, Green Lightning Being.
At last!! Nearly two years ago I posted the first version of him... many revamps were made, but not uploaded... however, here it is... V5!! Hope you enjoy it.
About this creation

(Bio)

Name: Uriel

Gender: Male

Species: Matoran, formerly Toa.

Element: Green Lightning, formerly sonics.

Titles: The wanderer, The eye-in-the-shadow, quiet thunderbolt.

Mask: none, rahsky skull.

Weapons: Lightning Staff, Dark Metal Blade, Thunderballs.

Story:



Uriel was a De-matoran, who was taken in the first Green Lightning Research Team. He was the only matoran of Sonics in the team, and his task was to locate an incoming storm by hear. He worked as a storm sonar.


But when he had the oportunity, he prefered to stay away of the group, alone, listening to the sounds of the enviroment. The only one that connected with him was Kellar, the Fe-matoran of the team carried the lightning energy catching gadgets.


During theyr most important quest, the one on the island of Raya Nuy, the most lightning-energized island of the Matoran Universe, a huge greenstorm was suddenly formed, and it didn't seem natural. The greenstorm caught Kellar and Uriel apart of the team. They ran as fast as they could, but when they got to the camp, they found just a huge amount of corpses... and an enormous horde of rahsky surrounding them.


Kellar, in his last attempt, took out a pair of the gadgets she was carrying: a staff, that was given to Uriel, and a small green sphere. While Uriel was thinking how the hell wold he use that staff, Kellar threw the green sphere to the rahsky frontline.


Suddenly, the greatest lightning Uiel had ever seen got down from the sky just to literally fill the sphere, which half a second after exploded with the energy of a Nova B
last.


...


Uriel awoke on the base of the team in Raya Nuy. He was surprised of being alive. He noticed he was laying on a stretcher, and he tryed to get up... but he couldn't. "You are alive! Don't get up... WAIT THERE!" Said an unmelodious voice. It sounded like a cracked gear.


Suddenly, a rusted hand carrying a mask was above his head. The hand put him the mask. Uriel felt like if he had been plugged, he felt now powerfull. "This is a mask made of one of the rahsky's head. Its not your's, but it does the job."

Uriel got up and saw Kellar, who was... well, not healthy at all... and smaller? "No, I am the one who has grown up... but..." Uriel thought.

Kellar: You see... the green lightning can act different on each one... you've been powered up, similarlly to how a Toa Stone will power up any other matoran, and I... well, I... *falls down*

TO BE CONTINUED.














































Bye :D

Please rate & comment.

Finally, a pair of things:


I'm not english native speaker, so helpe to improve my skills if I greatly fail.

I have the LDD of this, if you want it, ask me.



Comments

 I made it 
  September 1, 2013
Quoting L.A. Miranda Realmente ODIO las cabezas invertidas de Rahkshi. Asunto personal de todos modos, y al menos el diseño de cabeza es custom (no se ve nada mal la garra en ella), así que no lo tomes a crítica. Por lo demás, el MOC es impresionante, me deprime un poco ver que tengo compentencia española xD Tiene diseños custom bastante interesantes y sus proporciones no están nada mal. El único punto flojo que le veo es la parte inferior de las piernas, le falta verde y un poco más de grosor. El MOC, sin embargo, destaca más por sus armas y accesorios que otra cosa. Adoro los diseños empleados en ellas sobremanera. ¡Gran trabajo, querido! <3
Gracias, compatriota. Las piernas, que es lo que mas me ha "tocado", están mas o menos en WIP, dado que me gustaban no tan anchas, pero ahora que lo pienso, y me lo dices, si que son algo enclenques. Estoy trabajando en ello. PD: Es competencia sana xD
 I like it 
  August 29, 2013
Realmente ODIO las cabezas invertidas de Rahkshi. Asunto personal de todos modos, y al menos el diseño de cabeza es custom (no se ve nada mal la garra en ella), así que no lo tomes a crítica. Por lo demás, el MOC es impresionante, me deprime un poco ver que tengo compentencia española xD Tiene diseños custom bastante interesantes y sus proporciones no están nada mal. El único punto flojo que le veo es la parte inferior de las piernas, le falta verde y un poco más de grosor. El MOC, sin embargo, destaca más por sus armas y accesorios que otra cosa. Adoro los diseños empleados en ellas sobremanera. ¡Gran trabajo, querido! <3
 I made it 
  August 18, 2013
Quoting Reaper the Ultimate . This is really cool, and well built. The whole thing though reminds me a lot of Galaxus, but that's a good thing. A very solid, very impressive build.
Probably the colouring feeds that feeling. XD
 I like it 
  August 17, 2013
This is really cool, and well built. The whole thing though reminds me a lot of Galaxus, but that's a good thing. A very solid, very impressive build.
 I made it 
  August 17, 2013
Quoting MacLane Mars Very nice MOC, I love the editing on the main pic. The torso looks epic, as well as everything else. Normally I don't like the use of the Rahkshi heads as masks/helmets, but it actually looks great on your MOC. Keep up the good work mate.
The torso has tons of work on it, but as im not selfish, I have the LDD e.e This goes also for George Marshall: The editing was a last moment flash, luckily for good. I can edit for anione if you ask me politeli an if I have time. Finally, thanks to everybody. Glad you like it.
 I like it 
  August 17, 2013
Wow, this is excellent! Keep it up!
 I like it 
  August 17, 2013
Very nice MOC, I love the editing on the main pic. The torso looks epic, as well as everything else. Normally I don't like the use of the Rahkshi heads as masks/helmets, but it actually looks great on your MOC. Keep up the good work mate.
 I like it 
  August 17, 2013
Great editing! Looks good!
 I like it 
  August 17, 2013
Incredible!
 I made it 
  August 17, 2013
Quoting Daniel Janèi Very nice. Good job.
Thanks man. Despite the lack of pieces, I did my best. I hope to be able to order some stuff soon.
 I like it 
  August 17, 2013
Very nice. Good job.
 
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