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Naril, Toa of Neon
Naril, Toa of Neon EBC R3
About this creation
My entry to the Elemental Bionicle Contest Round 3!

Excuse the lack of pictures, my patience was failing with the posing of this Toa.


Name:Naril
Species:Matoran
Titles:Toa, Billboard
Powers:Control over Neon
Kanohi: Mahiki, Mask of Illusion in the shape of the Avohkii


Naril was created in the time slip, along with several other elemental toa. Barely anyone knows of this operation, which was abandoned soon after 6 were created.





Naril, thanks to her powers over neon, has a unique fighting style. In her body, flows neon, and being a biomechanical being, the energy inside of her causes some of her body to glow. She can control this and gain an advantage over the enemy by blinding them.





Naril, thanks to her powers over neon, has a unique fighting style. She wields an axe with a neon tube inside, emitting a bright, red neon light.



4th Wall
Honestly, the legs basically depleted all my effort
and patience. I started out with the great body design
and upper arms, then it kinda went downhill with the legs
I would really appreciate some pointers on making legs! Please!

Oh, by the way, good luck to the other contestants!



Comments

 I like it 
  October 4, 2013
Interesting moc I really like how well you incorporated the trans red-orange with the silver. Let's see, leg advice... To tell the truth I'm not sure I'm the best guy to give advice on legs; whenever I make good ones it just sorta came naturally. Well first don't resort to the launcher pieces unless you have a solid plan that looks good. Second just practice using lots of small technic pieces. I'm gonna be posting mocs with new leg designs that should be easy to figure out, you could take a look if you like.
 I like it 
  September 1, 2013
Not bad, but could be a little better. The upper arms are really great but then the lower arms are short and "boring", they ruin the look (in my opinion). The body is good and I like that the back is more exposed, so she doesn't look like she has "manly shoulders". The legs are creative, but look incomplete and could be made better. The thornraxx pieces look out of place. (and looks like they hinder articulation) Also, you did not take a picture of the feet/ankles :( As for a character concept and the color scheme, I have zero complaints. I'll give you a 4/5 for effort and creativity. Like I said, could be better but it's good enough :D What I usually do for mocs legs is make the upper legs custom and the lower leg very simple. Lazy, but it's easy to get away with :P
 I like it 
  August 21, 2013
Not your best, but not your worst either. There are some cool ideas here, I really like the use of the trans-orange, but I feel some of your designs could be worked on a bit.
 I made it 
  August 20, 2013
Quoting Riaso Wolf It a okay MOC, but i really hate those Nuva Shoulder on the chest ,the leg are okay but i don't like the Thornax Launcher on the leg.
I know the nuva plates usually look out of proportion, but by using that hero factory piece, It doesn't look too bad. Maybe I should of taken a picture from the side.
 I made it 
  August 20, 2013
Quoting X ~ Pointers! 1.The thornax launcher bits look a bit weird.It also looks to me like they limit possibility, though I could be wrong. Other than that I really can't find anything wrong with the legs, great job on them! Other than that, Great Work Everox! ;)
Thanks for the pointers, I guess it may be that legs are a bit harder for me, and by the time I finish them, I don't take the time needed to make good leg armor, or anything I do after the legs. Thanks for the feedback! :)
  August 20, 2013
It a okay MOC, but i really hate those Nuva Shoulder on the chest ,the leg are okay but i don't like the Thornax Launcher on the leg. The arm look great plus i like that you made it custom and not use the inika arm.
 I like it 
  August 20, 2013
Pointers! 1.The thornax launcher bits look a bit weird.It also looks to me like they limit possibility, though I could be wrong. Other than that I really can't find anything wrong with the legs, great job on them! Okay now the real opinions. The orange flows nicely, like as if the body flows with neon.Great work on that. Arms are very nice!Got no problems with them, other than the two finger issue, but that's just me. Torso is great!Again great job on incorporating the orange. Also smart idea using the axe as a weapon. Other than that, Great Work Everox! ;)
 
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