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malum (revamp)
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i would extremely like it if i could get some feedback so i can improve





i added a opposable thumbs so that he is able to carry items and to give a realistic look (they are the grey mata hands parallel to his claws)

uuuuuum... what are you doing malum.....?

look at malum having a blast with jim.... for now...

a vorox and malum hunting their next prey.

This is a vorox (also revamped) and malum shown side by side to show that he still is "short" or "shorter" than the vorox revamp (and the oOthers. Please rate and comment to help me improve! Thanks!



Comments

 I made it 
  August 21, 2013
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant Nice revamp! You wanted some constructive criticism though, so here we go! First of all, Malum is known as a pretty short and stocky guy and I think you would be better off shortening his upper arms a bit and bulking his upper body up a bit more. The thumbs would look more like thumbs if they resembled his claws a bit more. The easiest way to do that that I can think of would be to add orange or trans-orange sockets instead of grey ones, or have a different design with an orange spike part as the thumbnail.
sure! i will add the trans-orange mata hand! thanks! :)
 I like it 
  August 21, 2013
Nice revamp! You wanted some constructive criticism though, so here we go! First of all, Malum is known as a pretty short and stocky guy and I think you would be better off shortening his upper arms a bit and bulking his upper body up a bit more. The thumbs would look more like thumbs if they resembled his claws a bit more. The easiest way to do that that I can think of would be to add orange or trans-orange sockets instead of grey ones, or have a different design with an orange spike part as the thumbnail.
 I made it 
  August 20, 2013
Quoting Everox Toa of Plasma I honestly think they aren't his hands, but his weapons, but that's just me. :P The thumbs look a bit strange also, I think maybe it could be the opposite, with the mata hand connecting to the hordika neck as the thumb?
it doesn't work :/ it looks extremely awkward. so there is almost nothing i can do there. thanks!
 I like it 
  August 20, 2013
I honestly think they aren't his hands, but his weapons, but that's just me. :P The thumbs look a bit strange also, I think maybe it could be the opposite, with the mata hand connecting to the hordika neck as the thumb?
 I made it 
  August 20, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider Personally, I'd like to see some more work on the legs/ It seems like you only changed the arms, not the legs, and that doesn't work for me. Also, I thought the flame claws were a part of his hands, not his arms.
they are on his hands. i added opposable thumbs which are the grey hand pieces, i will clarify, and i made the connector piece on his leg different than the one piece connector and i don't have any more grey Technic parts.
  August 20, 2013
Personally, I'd like to see some more work on the legs/ It seems like you only changed the arms, not the legs, and that doesn't work for me. Also, I thought the flame claws were a part of his hands, not his arms.
 
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