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Spark Of The Rain: Chapter One
The first installment to my new CYOA series, Spark Of The Rain.
About this creation
Prologue
In the near future, a gamma ray burst caused by the merging of two collapsed stars causes the ozone layer of the earth to greatly deplete. The consequential apocalypse destroys nearly all of man and his creations. The environment is now a hazardous place, but the survivors band together and work to survive, despite the dangers they face. Over a period of time, the survivors develop supernatural and magical abilities to survive the hazards. Together they restore the ozone layer and life on earth begins to regrow, despite the planet's new deformed appearance. Hundreds of years later, a nation is formed with four provinces. The fire province, the water province, the air province, and the enchantment province. Each province has a chief element of magic (fire: fire, air: air, water: water, enchantment: charms, poisons, specialized magics). The enchantment province grows too greedy with their power and then turns against the other provinces, now being called the poison province. The rest of the provinces fight back and, after half a decade of fighting, finally destroy the poison province. After the war, the magic is taken out of all the children's genes, and a decree is issued stating that all under 18 will be unable to wield magic.

...Seventeen Years Later...



The sun rises over the edge of the snow-topped mountains, illuminating the forested valley below. It represents the start of a new day.

Up on top one of the many cliff faces overlooking the fire province village of Terbuth rests a small cottage. It is the cottage of the sorcerer Jake Crumble. Though he was originally from the air province, he had come to the fire province to help fight the poison tribe during the war. There he found Tybalt Merek and his dying mother. He promised to take care of the child, which he did. Seventeen years later Tybalt grew into a young but talented archer, using his skills to earn money by selling the animals he hunts at the village's marketplace. However he was just one year short of being able to use magic, something Tybalt longed to do.



Today, Tybalt follows his usual routine, hunting. After gathering his hunting supplies, consisting of a bow and nearly full quiver of arrows, Tybalt heads out of the cottage towards the forests where all wildlife and animals are plentiful.

Jake: Where are you headed?

Tybalt: I'm off to hunt with Ender and Drake, as I usually do. I do this everyday, why do you ask?



Jake: Oh, just wondering if you would've done something different.

Tybalt: I wish I could do something different. I want an adventure, my life is so boring. All I do is hunt, sell, hunt, sell, hunt -

Jake: Yeah, I get it. Maybe you will find an adventure someday.

Tybalt: Someday...but I'm nearly eighteen, I've never had any real adventures, not even with my friends. I can't wait 'til I can use magic though.

Jake: Don't worry you'll be eighteen soon. Ender isn't eighteen yet either, so he also knows how it feels.

Tybalt: Still, I want to use magic.

Jake: Just, go hunt, I'll see you later.



After gathering his friends at the marketplace of Terbuth, the gang headed out into the vast emerald expense of the forest crowning the the outskirts of the village. Neither Drake or Ender were hunters, as they lacked the proper weapons to hunt with, but they liked to accompany Tybalt on his hunting trips just as much as Tybalt enjoyed their company.

Tybalt: I don't why you to bring your swords if you can't hunt with them.

Drake (double swords): Who knows? They might come in handy.



Ender (whisper): Ooh, there's a rabbit! Snipe it, Tybalt!

Tybalt drew an arrow from his quiver, set it on the string, and pulled back to his chin. He carefully aimed approximately where the heart was located. He parted his fingers and the string snapped forward.



The arrow hit the rabbit which landed about a yard away from it's original spot.

Ender: Wow, great shot!

Tybalt: Dude, I was like fifteen feet away. I don't know how that rabbit didn't hear us.



Drake: Hey another one!

Drake immediately threw one of his swords which surprisingly hit the rabbit. It let out a small squeak before hitting the ground.

Tybalt: That was impressive.

Drake: Yeah, and these swords are heavy.

Ok, I'll take this rabbit. Drake, you hunted that you can keep it.

Drake: Duh! I was going to keep it anyway.



The trio retrieved their weapons and then walked back to the marketplace. After Drake and Ender left to go back to their own homes, Tybalt proceeded up the half-mile long hike to his own. As he went, he thought about the future, hoping that he could someday be given an adventure to experience.

Builder's/Writer's note:

I'm finally done with the first chapter of Spark Of The Rain!! I hope you guys enjoyed. To those who have characters, there are no choices yet and those characters that were not in this one will probably not be in for another couple chapters.

Thanks for reading! Remember to rate and comment! The next chapter will hopefully be out soon!



Comments

 I like it 
  September 28, 2013
Can't wait to see more episodes :)
 I made it 
  September 23, 2013
Quoting Everett Stanton Stephen I am going to be entering my first entry soon! I'll tell you when it's done.
Yay!
 I like it 
  September 22, 2013
Stephen I am going to be entering my first entry soon! I'll tell you when it's done.
 I like it 
  September 21, 2013
I really like the house!
 I made it 
  September 5, 2013
Quoting "Arctic Wolf " Thanks! Okay, I was thinking, maybe the same time line, same village, Terbuth, but some new characters. I had a character in mind... I'll make a private group and invite you. Thanks again! Hope to see the third chapter soon!
Well, before I do that I want to make my MO entry and I have an entry for another contest built right now. I'll post that soon.
 I like it 
  September 5, 2013
Thanks! Okay, I was thinking, maybe the same time line, same village, Terbuth, but some new characters. I had a character in mind... I'll make a private group and invite you. Thanks again! Hope to see the third chapter soon!
 I like it 
  September 5, 2013
I just read this and it was cool! I still do not know how to make a character like this...
 I made it 
  September 5, 2013
Quoting "Arctic Wolf " I was actually wondering.. if you created this whole subject, then I was wondering if I could something similar to it. If so, would you be interested in helping me with it?
Sure!
 I like it 
  September 5, 2013
I was actually wondering.. if you created this whole subject, then I was wondering if I could something similar to it. If so, would you be interested in helping me with it?
 I like it 
  September 4, 2013
Excellent details!
 I like it 
  September 4, 2013
Nice work! The set is well-built and the hunting scene is clever. Great arrow technique.
 I like it 
  September 4, 2013
It starts.... Nice job!
 I like it 
  September 3, 2013
Awesome chapter! Looking forward to more and seeing my character :)
 I like it 
  September 2, 2013
Cool story!
 I like it 
  September 2, 2013
Excellent work! Looking forward to more!
 I like it 
  September 2, 2013
Nice setting! The story is pretty cool :D can't wait to see the next episode :)
 I made it 
  September 2, 2013
Quoting Mario Fabrio Cool episode, nice house.
Thank you! It's nice to hear from expert builders such as yourself!
 I like it 
  September 2, 2013
Cool episode, nice house.
 I like it 
  September 2, 2013
Wow, awesome episode, Stephen! Can't wait for the next one!
 I like it 
  September 1, 2013
Cool episode! A tip, usually there is a post that begins before the episodes to introduce the characters. :D
 I made it 
  September 1, 2013
Quoting Dylan Something Nice beginning! I look forward to more episodes. Nice sets. Although personally I felt it wasn't very long, I can understand that perfectly :P
This chapter was mostly to introduce some characters, and I wanted to get this out of the way. After I make the next (which will be longer) I can destroy this and make my MO entry. I can't wait to see that BL order you made!
 I like it 
  September 1, 2013
I was in the first episode!!!! YAY!!! Can't wait for the next. Great Job!
  September 1, 2013
Oh, and BTW, I just ordered my second Bricklink order today. Pieces for my MOCOlympics entry. Tons of Dark grey slopes, chee... Wait a minute! You'll see it soon enough :P
  September 1, 2013
Nice beginning! I look forward to more episodes. Nice sets. Although personally I felt it wasn't very long, I can understand that perfectly :P
 
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