I had been captured in battle, but I now awoke in the ruins of a temple...
All my supplies and clothes had been taken, and I stood chained to a wall in rags!
I knew I was about to be killed, but maybe I might have one last chance.......
Standing there, 10 feet away were outlaws! They could have easily killed me but they didn't? Instead..there leader told them this "You must make your way to Mythron...there is little time! Our plans our nearly complete!"
Without a word they disappeared...
Then she approached me, a lust of love in her eyes...it was straining! Our hearts where intwined and I knew that in that moment I became fully aware of my deep love....
Fighting my heart with all will power, I kicked her away! She lay on the ground, gathering her strength to fight!
We both knew that our love was strong, but even stronger than that, or anything;was our loyalty! We wouldn't stop fighting for our factions 'till the bitter end!
With surprising stamina, she whirled me towards the wall faster than a dragon took flight!
She had an axe in here hand, and I knew she was going to solve her pain by killing me!
At that instant, In what appeared to be my dying breathe I said...............................I love you.
(Powerful stuff, eh? :)
To my fainting surprise, she cut my bonds! She couldn't come to kill me, but she set me free.
I had a spark of hope that one day she would turn her loyalty to Mythron...so that on day we may be wed in honor!
Then we steamed with emotions for a moment..she looked as if she was going to cry! I wanted to take her at that moment and-
I couldn't control myself, and neither could she! *Dramatic kissing nosies* And then, I recited a memory, the day I had been knighted by the king of Mythron...He told me"Now go Sir Kindle, you will be a loyal knight of Mythron! May you be true yo your kingdom till your dying breathe!" I broke away from her and ran of into the unknown;with a deep passion to return to Mythron!
Quoting kaeleb appleyard
* noms on her face one last time before running to join my team*
love the love story bro ( still a better love story then twilight) also the girl reminds me of my ex for some reasion O_0
Okay guys! I've heard all your opinions...and here's what's going to happen. She's going to going to marry me in secret after some "things, and exciting things" happen. Then she'll change factions maybe...
Totally agreeing with Michael K here....It is a nice build though! I think it would be a better story if you guys *secretly* marry and she still works for the outlaws and you still work for Mythron....it would be really interesting :)