I did not like my first character intro. I thought the build was rushed and the story semi-okay. So this is a reboot...
About this creation
His name is Ray Spectre. He is an assassin, an outlaw, and a mercenary. And He is a dead man...
It: He is ready.
The booted footsteps raced along the road. A man and two Rainoshians ran along the pass of Elkon and approached the Mythroian city of Reedus.
Man: Are you sure you should trust him.
Almanon, prince of Mythron, looked out over the pass of Elkon. His eyes gazed out over the Eastern wood just missing the assassin and his men.
It: I do not trust him. He is a mercenary who will betray us at any moment.
The castle hallway was alive with blood and battle. The assassin dodged and dashed, slicing through Mythronian guards.
Man: Then why did you hire him?
Prince Almanon was still at his balcony, the sounds of battle deafened by the stone floor. His sharp ears pricked as he heard the soft sound of footsteps behind him. But it was to late...
It: To kill him.
Ray Spectre stepped past the body of prince Almanon. His booted feet made no sound as he escaped the castle, his work had been done.
It: He needs to die. Otherwise, he will destroy us. Now go. Meet him at the appointed place. Give him his money and when he turns to leave, STAB HIM IN THE BACK! Now go...
The three vignettes I made for this. I really like this story. It uses a lot of neat techniques such as shifting through the story line. The next part comes soon!