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Vorred 03
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Rajskil LoR
  September 26, 2013
I don't want you to think I don't like this vorred, my complaints about Theran should be ignored... I watch doctor who for cyring out loud, writing the way the you feel is the best way! Why I like doctor who so much, and why I love this story, so keep it up!
 I made it 
  September 25, 2013
Quoting Wertman 8
Quoting Callan LoF I don't have any clue why Glonor just turned into a Bohrok.
I just thought I'd answer a question, even if not directed at me; on the BS01 page for the Bohrok, it does say that a few Av Matoran had been allocated by the Great Beings to transform into Bohrok at some point in their lives, so it is atual cannon. (http://biosector01.com/wiki/index.php/Bohrok) Nice one Vorred, a nice ending, though like most I thought the Solanus part was a little anti-climatic. I see what you were trying to do with it, but it seemed a little much to break out into fighting over it... Unless this is supposed to be a sign of Theran (or Solanus) cracking under the stress of leadership. If that's the case, then awesome. But still, can't wait for the final segment! :)
Theran is definitely under stress after that battle with losing yet another teammate of the original six. But you're right, the Solunus part was probably a bit too fast. I had the disadvantage that I did the camp-scenes first... if I would've had the time and the place wasn't destroyed by rain and overgrowth by the time I had probably retaken the scene. The final part will come... but until then, expect some new MoCs since I'm going to revamp the team!
 I made it 
  September 25, 2013
Quoting [ Chro ] I like Theran.
Then he has at least one fan!
  September 24, 2013
I like Theran.
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  September 23, 2013
Quoting Callan LoF I don't have any clue why Glonor just turned into a Bohrok.
I just thought I'd answer a question, even if not directed at me; on the BS01 page for the Bohrok, it does say that a few Av Matoran had been allocated by the Great Beings to transform into Bohrok at some point in their lives, so it is atual cannon. (http://biosector01.com/wiki/index.php/Bohrok) Nice one Vorred, a nice ending, though like most I thought the Solanus part was a little anti-climatic. I see what you were trying to do with it, but it seemed a little much to break out into fighting over it... Unless this is supposed to be a sign of Theran (or Solanus) cracking under the stress of leadership. If that's the case, then awesome. But still, can't wait for the final segment! :)
 I made it 
  September 23, 2013
Quoting Callan LoF
I think you probably misunderstood some parts. Solunus offers a solution, yes... but it's against all Theran has fought for (in his view). He is a pretty unliked character on the CBW as well due to his rash actions in the past like stabbing Glonor. Solunus' idea should create some discussion of wether or not he should "infect" everybody... and we haven't seen it working yet. Are the risks too high, maybe? He also didn't want to kill Theran... if you re-read his lines, he thinks to get Theran into the same jail the Skakdi is. So no killing but imprisoning. And that Glonor part is actually quite important as it will have a great impact on the next installment. His transformation is nothing I just did for the heck of it; It's a part of the canon Bionicle Universe that Av-Matoran become Bohrok when they die. And exactly that just happened. It's a bit sad you dislike the whole 13-chapters long comic because of these small misunderstandings or open plot lines that will be closed in the future. I would like to keep this discussion going and hear your answer, so please reply.
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  September 23, 2013
I liked where this was going, but this epilogue was disappointing. You built Solunus up as if he's got some evil connection or doing something really big that's either crazy bad or crazy good, and it turns out he's making a SOLUTION that doesn't even sound that bad. Great, but what happens? Theran gets angry and just kills Solunus. And Solunus is pretty out of character just pulling out a weapon to kill this Toa JUST for disagreeing! How will that fix anything?! He should've just waited for everybody else to show up and introduce the plan to them all. If they didn't like it and he was THAT angry, he could run away and try to find Tilira himself. It just annoys me that this plan doesn't have any explained side effects and Theran just rejects it. I don't think I can like Theran as a character anymore! This whole story is becoming a bit convoluted, I don't have any clue why Glonor just turned into a Bohrok. Don't get me wrong, this story is way better than any of my MocPages stories were, but I just really think this "Patriots" sequel is kind of a letdown in comparison to your first comic. Hopefully you can fix it in the third one, killing off Theran would help me feel better. :3
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Rajskil The Rahkshi
  September 22, 2013
You kill me Vorred! Meh, I hope Theran will stop rampaging like that, being a bit selfish! I feel almost as though he just wants to kill Nuva and replace him!
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  September 22, 2013
Cool!
 
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