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Finally.
About this creation


Name: Ciaros
Gender: Male
Species: Toa
Element: Psionics
Age: 21,000 yrs.
Personality: Sarcastic, but friendly. Very intelligent, and enjoys having a good time.
Backstory: Ciaros was born in a small village of Ce-Matoran roughly 20,000 years before the reformation of Spherus Magna. As one might imagine, it was considered by most of the Ce-Matoran to be highly unusual for a male Ce-Matoran to be alive. They took him as a sign of bad luck, and tried to do away with him by tossing Ciaros into a river.

When Ciaros woke up, he noticed an old fellow with a shaman-like appearance. This being had blue and gold armour. He smiled kindly, and said, "Hello little one. My name is Orde."

For 16,000 years Ciaros lived with this Orde. He, at one point, recieved a Toa Stone from Orde. Orde then taught him how to use his Psionic abilities. One day, when the two were taking a walk in a forest, they were attacked by an Ash Bear! Normally, Orde would have been able to defeat the beast, but it took him by surprise. Orde's dying act was erasing Ciaros's memory of him, sparing him the grief of his death.

For the next 4,000 years, Ciaros wandered around in various areas, from Metru Nui to the island of Mata Nui itself. He earned a reputation as "The Toa Without a Mission" and gained no small amount of fame. When the Mata Nui robot was taken over by Teridax, he was one of the first to escape. After a few weeks of space travel, he settled on a planet called Auros Magna, and was taken in by two Toa of Light named Aurum and Helios. He was given a position as a special-ops agent and was paired with a certain Raxonax. Ciaros knew then... He was home.



Ciaros: Ah... Finally.



Back view.



Lower legs.



Upper legs and waist.



Back of legs. (Finally, ARMOUR!)



Torso..



....and back of torso. Wow this is predictable.



Upper arms.



Lower arms.



Won't tell ya what this is, too complicated.



Ciaros: So yeah people, I've pretty much got it all... Including mercy. (LoZ fan reference).



Action.

-wheeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEE-

Ciaros: WUT DA-

-KONG-



Ciaros: Ow.



Ciaros: And I guess I have these.

(Sorry for blurry pic)



Ciaros: Yah, they're preeeetty sweet.



Ciaros: Now.. what was I supposed to tell you guys..

???: That I'm still alive?

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Ciaros: Oh right. Yeah. Pikachu here is still alive.

Raelos: Ha. Ha.

Ciaros: :P



Ciaros: hmm.. what else.. Oh yeah.



Ciaros: X, wherever you are, PUT. THE. GUN. DOWN.



X: Drat.

Ciaros: Now for phase two.

X: Wat.



-BLAAAAM-



X: AGONY!!!!!



Ciaros: Muuuuuch better.



Comparison with Lianyu/Inika Comparison.

Ciaros: Hallo shorty.

Lianyu: Ha. Ha.



...



Ciaros: Goodbye people!



Next up: A pair of eyes is better than one...

4th wall:

There are no words in the English language to describe how pleased I am with this. Apart from that, I got nuttin.

See ya next time!




Comments

  February 6, 2014
DAT BLUEBERRY
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  December 29, 2013
dat spam tho. :P
  December 2, 2013
You'll like him.
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  December 2, 2013
Quoting Zach Lucia Good, cause I already made him. ;)
Lawl.
  December 2, 2013
Good, cause I already made him. ;)
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  December 2, 2013
Quoting Zach Lucia Excellent SM! Would you mind if I made him?
Thanks Zach! No prob, feel free to! :D
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  December 2, 2013
Excellent SM! Would you mind if I made him?
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  November 28, 2013
Like the theme song a lot :P Also, really well built! My only grip is that the neck sticks up weirdly, maybe bulk that up a bit. Meh, either way, here he is posterized! :P http://mocpages.com/moc.php/375064
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  November 14, 2013
I like him, he looks really cool and the colour scheme works, but he seems to tall and thin, in a way that kinda doesn't work
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  November 11, 2013
Almost everything looks awesome and is much improved over previouse versions, although the fore-arms are too broad and flat, the neck is too long, and the lower legs are kinda weird. Also the blue kk blades on the sides of the sword look kind of, ah well how do I say this; excessive.
  November 10, 2013
Oh, I know it wasn't supposed to be bulky, but there's a line where a MOC becomes too unnaturally thin.
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  November 10, 2013
Quoting [ Chro ] While the build itself is better, it maintains the same issues as the previous versions- too tall and too thin. The upper legs are like three studs longer and two studs thinner than they needed to be. XD
Sneh. Was looking for peculiar height and lankiness on this one, not bulk. At all. I do agree about the length of the upper legs though, but if I didn't use that little grey bit, the MOC would literally collapse XD
  November 10, 2013
While the build itself is better, it maintains the same issues as the previous versions- too tall and too thin. The upper legs are like three studs longer and two studs thinner than they needed to be. XD
  November 10, 2013
@Chro Yep.
  November 10, 2013
Is this V3?
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  November 9, 2013
Happy birthday! :D Oh and awesome version of Ciaros.
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  October 18, 2013
Excellent SM! One of my favorite's on Mocpages!
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  October 14, 2013
good job, garret. wertman 8 did a smaller version which is also cool. bu u know what they always say, the origanal's guts get all the glory.
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  October 2, 2013
Like always an excellent job Garrett. If I can track down a brain attack surge(or any surge) I'll make Ciaros. Also Spirit is getting (for lack of a better term) a devil trigger or rage mode. So please do stay tuned.
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  September 30, 2013
Quoting Coconut Fanatic I'm really liking these improvements, the torso has a much better look now, the shoulders look much more normal. The lower calf armor is great too, excellent coverage. I would say that you should raise the knee's position, as well as adjust the waist design so there isn't a hollow gap between the legs. Both of those don't really matter much, it would just help a little. The upper torso: Magnifique!!
Thanks Teri! :D
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  September 30, 2013
I'm really liking these improvements, the torso has a much better look now, the shoulders look much more normal. The lower calf armor is great too, excellent coverage. I would say that you should raise the knee's position, as well as adjust the waist design so there isn't a hollow gap between the legs. Both of those don't really matter much, it would just help a little. The upper torso: Magnifique!!
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  September 30, 2013
Excellent! I love his new look!
  September 29, 2013
@Werty I find that a bit ironic that you're telling Garrett about a long neck, when the original Rax had a long neck. XD :P
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  September 29, 2013
Awesome! Loving the torso design on him now! The only thing I'd say is that the neck seems a tad too long
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  September 28, 2013
Quoting Clever Crowe Nice figure-build, and excellent humor in the narrative, as well. Constructive crit: Pros- nice torso and lower leg shaping. Also like the upper arms (I actually didn't know that 2x blue technic bracket existed (in blue)). Cons- the brackets used right at the hipjoint (grey 'heighteners' by Lego's description) make the UPPER leg look really skinny, as is. There is an open axle-pin available at the top of each blue armor section you used, mid-thigh; would be a great point to anchor something to bulk that look out a bit (the full-frontal point-of-view is the only one that suffers, btw, the profiles look fine). Just a little addition would really pay off. Cheers!~ =)
Thanks for the Crit, Clever! :D
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  September 28, 2013
Nice figure-build, and excellent humor in the narrative, as well. Constructive crit: Pros- nice torso and lower leg shaping. Also like the upper arms (I actually didn't know that 2x blue technic bracket existed (in blue)). Cons- the brackets used right at the hipjoint (grey 'heighteners' by Lego's description) make the UPPER leg look really skinny, as is. There is an open axle-pin available at the top of each blue armor section you used, mid-thigh; would be a great point to anchor something to bulk that look out a bit (the full-frontal point-of-view is the only one that suffers, btw, the profiles look fine). Just a little addition would really pay off. Cheers!~ =)
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  September 28, 2013
Quoting L.A. Miranda It would be a great honor to appear in your comic series, dear! *bows* Also, I noticed you consider me one of your favourite MOCers, so I want to thank you for that too. You make very happy! <3
Okay, cool. You get a role as a "compadre" to one of my main characters :D No prob! =)
  September 28, 2013
It would be a great honor to appear in your comic series, dear! *bows* Also, I noticed you consider me one of your favourite MOCers, so I want to thank you for that too. You make very happy! <3
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  September 28, 2013
Quoting Patryk Smajdor Mhm, he finally looks like something. You got rid of those absurdally wide shoulders +1 for it. However limbs are way too skinny for this body, also the way how legs connect to pelvis looks strange for me. Anyway, you're improving.
Yes, he does :D Like I said to L.A., shoulders=horribIe D: I have to disagree on the skinniness though, I'm skinny IRL, so I needed to make Ciaros match. Meh, that was V2's design, and as I have no suitable non-custom waist bits for that, and I'm honestly too Iazy to make something else, I just stuck a Metru-chest (one of my favorite parts btw) and called it done, lol. Thanks Patryk :D
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  September 28, 2013
Quoting L.A. Miranda Now he really looks awesome! The main problem of the last version was the width of those shoulders, but you have improved it a lot! The proportions are much better, more humanoid; and you have worked a lot on every part of him but keeping a lot of his original parts, like the Metru chests on the shoulders. Seriously, I'm really amazed of how much did you improved it. Even the weapons! I noticed those blue Bohrok eyes there! ;3 Man, there are a lot of blue parts I have even never seen before xD Also, glad to see that you keep Lianyu assembled! Thanks a lot! Well, I think I'm done here. Marvelous work, dear! Can't wait for your next page! <3 (P.S: The picture with Raelos doesn't work =3)
:D thanks L.A.! I agree, those shoulders were horribIe >.< Wow, thanks, coming from you that means a lot =) No prob, he's one of my favorite non-custom MOCs I've built, so I had to keep him assembled. (Plus, if it's okey with you, I'm using him in my comic series that I'll make soon ;D) And yes, that blue+gray thing is Byte V2.
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  September 28, 2013
Mhm, he finally looks like something. You got rid of those absurdally wide shoulders +1 for it. However limbs are way too skinny for this body, also the way how legs connect to pelvis looks strange for me. Anyway, you're improving.
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  September 28, 2013
Now he really looks awesome! The main problem of the last version was the width of those shoulders, but you have improved it a lot! The proportions are much better, more humanoid; and you have worked a lot on every part of him but keeping a lot of his original parts, like the Metru chests on the shoulders. Seriously, I'm really amazed of how much did you improved it. Even the weapons! I noticed those blue Bohrok eyes there! ;3 Man, there are a lot of blue parts I have even never seen before xD Also, glad to see that you keep Lianyu assembled! Thanks a lot! Well, I think I'm done here. Marvelous work, dear! Can't wait for your next page! <3 (P.S: The picture with Raelos doesn't work =3)
Garrett .
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Rajskil LoR
  September 27, 2013
Oh my gosh, I love this moc, and this story!
  September 27, 2013
Well, I guess his history (up until Great Cataclysm) would be the same as in Prime universe anyway. Shall we move this to message wall?
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  September 27, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider #2 Since both of our stories seem prime universe (by which no major changes are made to TLG's story) I'd like them to be congruous and primary. #5 I didn't see that he had waist articulation.
#2 Mine's AU. #5 Some, but very little.
  September 27, 2013
#2 Since both of our stories seem prime universe (by which no major changes are made to TLG's story) I'd like them to be congruous and primary. #5 I didn't see that he had waist articulation.
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  September 27, 2013
Quoting X ~ dang pickles... anyway forgot to mention the story is killer. :P
Thanks.
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  September 27, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider
Quoting Weight lost Ciaros, er, Garrett #1: Everyone else will be nearly that tall soon, so it balances out. #2 AU, man. #3 Comin soon. #4 Yes #5 Okey.
#1 still needs bulk. #2 What is AU? #3 looking forward. #4 Psychic transmission. #5 Does it move anymore?
#1 neh #2 Alternate Universe. #5 HUH?
  September 27, 2013
Quoting Weight lost Ciaros, er, Garrett #1: Everyone else will be nearly that tall soon, so it balances out. #2 AU, man. #3 Comin soon. #4 Yes #5 Okey.
#1 still needs bulk. #2 What is AU? #3 looking forward. #4 Psychic transmission. #5 Does it move anymore?
  September 27, 2013
dang pickles... anyway forgot to mention the story is killer. :P
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  September 27, 2013
Quoting X ~ CIAROS!?!? Where did your bulk go! Though it does work given the details about yourself and the fact he's a special op guy. Nice job! ;) Now it's time for me to go change my pants from all this awesomeness. :P
Ciaros: It flew away with the monkeypickles pal. Thanks X.
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  September 27, 2013
Quoting Stormjay Rider #1 I think Ciaros is too tall in this version. That doesn't seem to fit, he's a Toa, not a Vortixx. #2 For some backstory cleanup -- I have it that Ciaros spent a good bit of time (maybe until your 4000 BGC) with Jethryn and the outcast. I think that, since Jethryn pretty much knows everyone who's living in secret, he could easily be switching between training with Orde and aiding Jethryn and his team. : #3. Where's "it"? The one that shouldn't come back, but I want to come back? : #4. When X gets knocked into the prime universe (my version), will the Ciaros of the prime universe recognize him? : #5. I'm thinking I'll have to revamp Ciaros soon. I don't think I have enough silver pieces ATM to build Deaskuth after X, and Sarge doesn't like parts repetition. So, I'll have to trade some parts out on Ciaros.
#1: Everyone else will be nearly that tall soon, so it balances out. #2 AU, man. #3 Comin soon. #4 Yes #5 Okey.
  September 27, 2013
P. S. Nice waist. Much better than V2.
  September 27, 2013
#1 I think Ciaros is too tall in this version. That doesn't seem to fit, he's a Toa, not a Vortixx. #2 For some backstory cleanup -- I have it that Ciaros spent a good bit of time (maybe until your 4000 BGC) with Jethryn and the outcast. I think that, since Jethryn pretty much knows everyone who's living in secret, he could easily be switching between training with Orde and aiding Jethryn and his team. : #3. Where's "it"? The one that shouldn't come back, but I want to come back? : #4. When X gets knocked into the prime universe (my version), will the Ciaros of the prime universe recognize him? : #5. I'm thinking I'll have to revamp Ciaros soon. I don't think I have enough silver pieces ATM to build Deaskuth after X, and Sarge doesn't like parts repetition. So, I'll have to trade some parts out on Ciaros.
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  September 27, 2013
CIAROS!?!? Where did your bulk go! Though it does work given the details about yourself and the fact he's a special op guy. Nice job! ;) Now it's time for me to go change my pants from all this awesomeness. :P
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  September 27, 2013
Awesome new version of Ciaros Garrett!
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  September 27, 2013
Quoting A. Sargent But yeah, overall, this is an incredible build.
Thanks. :) Also, backstory and theme song. Yey.
  September 27, 2013
But yeah, overall, this is an incredible build.
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  September 27, 2013
Quoting A. Sargent Very nice. I like it overall, though the upper legs could use some work. Best version yet, though.
Thanks Andrew! :D
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  September 27, 2013
Very nice. I like it overall, though the upper legs could use some work. Best version yet, though.
 
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