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Read my latest MOC to find out who the 'Assassin' is.
About this creation

I had organised a meeting with a demolitionist, buying his 'mining' tools.

His carriage appeared.

"Are you the buyers?" he asked. "Yes,we are." I replied.

He grabbed a basket.

He balanced it.

And delicately poured the bombs on the ground.

He put the basket back, and asked for the money.

I motioned for Gamwich to give the money to the miner.

He reached down for it.

And picked it up.

And threw it into the back of his carriage.

He climbed back on his horse and said "Be careful with that stuff, I know from experience."

He rode off and Toras picked up a bomb.

We came to a wall, supposedly abandoned.

We all climbed over.

And landed on the other side.

Toras put the bomb down.

"Go back to the other side, I will set it up." I ordered.

I set it up.

And dived over the wall.

We all readied ourselves for the explosion.

A guard walked past, laughing with his friend.

"I know right!" the other guard said.

Gamwich stood up.

"Get away!" Gamwich yelled. "STOP RIGHT THERE, CRIMINAL SCUM!" the guard yelled.

I tackled Gamwich.

BOOM!

I didn't know what I was looking at, I was so disoriented.

I let out a manly shriek at the sight of Gamwich's severed head.

I let out a full-blown scream as the rest of the guards fell on the ground."Run!" Toras yelled.

I started running as a spear pierced my foot. "GAH!" I screamed.

I limped after Toras.

The characters.

The burned demolitonist.

The carriage.

The scene.

The scene again.

I'm looking through youuu!

Again.

Meanwhile, back in Worsan.(Perspective of the 'Assassin') I had been stalking this Mythronian Captain for hours, and soon my plan will work out.

There he is! "Hey baby, why don't you come with me?" the outlaw asked.

"Hey! Look at me!" the outlaw said.

"I SAID LOOK AT ME!" the outlaw yelled. The woman screamed.

The legionnaire looked over, and was infuriated by what he saw.

"LET HER GO,SCUMBAG!' the legionnaire yelled, pure anger in his voice.

The legionnaire tried to keep his anger under control as the outlaw looked at him.

"What you goin' do about it, huh?" The outlaw said, menace dripping from his voice.

"I'm going to arrest you, you criminal scum." the legionnaire said. The outlaw pulled out his shortsword, and the legionnaire readied his spear.

I jumped in to the alley and kicked the captain in the head.

His head smashed into the wall, knocking him out.

I started dragging his body away, as the outlaw go a good stab in.

The outlaw was still trying to shove his blade deeper into the legionnaire's stomach.

The legionnaire fell, and I had nearly finished dragging the limp body out of the alley.

Set.

Looking through.

Legionnaire, Assassin.

Captain, outlaw, woman.

I judged that the Captain didn't know where he was, seeing as he just looked confused.

I walked in and he seemed to not know who I was.

I pulled out my sword and then he screamed.

A cold wind gushed through the cracks in the walls, and seemed to make the cell a little bit bleaker. "Tell me what you know." I said.

"Is everything all rig-!" The jailor walked in and paused when he saw me. "WHO ARE YOU?" he yelled.

I threw my sword and it went through his gut.

I walked over and pulled it back out.

Then I started walking over to the captain.

I put my sword to his neck and he told me everything."The reason we are all here is because many of us were left stranded here in the war, and many others are looking for the Black Lotus!" he squealed.

"You'll never find them." I said as I slit his throat.

I walked off. And I need to find Eros.

The cell.

Bird's eye.

Assassin, prisoner, Jailor.

The backs.



Comments

 I like it 
  April 29, 2014
Very decent... But you still have the PIECES. Go for more and you can crush me!
 I like it 
  October 24, 2013
cool and funny story, lol, I m willing to collaborate with you, but, I m not sure I have the purple hair, and I m sure I don t have your coat, you d have to change clothes before you appear in my story, I ll check for your hair in the meantime.
 I like it 
  October 15, 2013
No problem! The last person I gave honest feedback to got pretty mad at me, so I was a little leery about commenting, but I'm glad you're willing to take input!
 I made it 
  October 14, 2013
Quoting Freeling . Actually, I was hoping the legionnaire would win. I actually thought he would win.. Hmmm... Nice MOC. Multi-colored walls aren't the best though. Such as blue and grey and white? I would take the blue out. And I would also suggest looking around MOCpages to get an idea of some good walls.
Ok, thanks!
 I like it 
  October 14, 2013
Creepy.
 I like it 
  October 14, 2013
Actually, I was hoping the legionnaire would win. I actually thought he would win.. Hmmm... Nice MOC. Multi-colored walls aren't the best though. Such as blue and grey and white? I would take the blue out. And I would also suggest looking around MOCpages to get an idea of some good walls.
 I made it 
  October 11, 2013
Quoting Thomas of Tortuga Nice color choices on the minifigs, and I'm glad you took the time to add landscaping and a well-designed wagon to the first set! However, there are too many pictures for the story. Your readers can use their imaginations for what happens. Also, aside from the minifigures and the first set, most of the scenes are rather plain. They would be improved by some doors, barrels, or other details to break up the walls. I'm sorry if I sound overcritical, but I hope this helps you in future building.
Thanks for the feedback! You are probably the first person who has given me real tips, instead of a suggestion to a (relatively) confusing guide. I will add in barrels and stuff into my next MOC.
 I like it 
  October 11, 2013
Nice color choices on the minifigs, and I'm glad you took the time to add landscaping and a well-designed wagon to the first set! However, there are too many pictures for the story. Your readers can use their imaginations for what happens. Also, aside from the minifigures and the first set, most of the scenes are rather plain. They would be improved by some doors, barrels, or other details to break up the walls. I'm sorry if I sound overcritical, but I hope this helps you in future building.
 I made it 
  October 11, 2013
Quoting Mr. Cab Awesome! I liked the bomb scene, and the assassin's minifig is awesome!
Thank you!
  October 11, 2013
Awesome! I liked the bomb scene, and the assassin's minifig is awesome!
 I made it 
  October 11, 2013
Quoting Chris . Yay! Another assassin! Cool story too!
Thanks!
  October 11, 2013
Yay! Another assassin! Cool story too!
 
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