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LOM Character Intro/Scorecard: Halbert
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Character Intro for The Lands of Mythron.




Halbert's heavy footsteps broke the silence of the calm morning. It was funny, he reflected; his mother had only given him two pieces of advice before he left, and he had already ignored one of them. The first was to be quiet and careful. The second - which he had originally taken as a joke - was "don't die".

Don't die. The words had a haunting effect on Halbert now that he was carrying a real weapon, rather than the crudely carved wooden sticks that he had practiced with back at home. At home, he had been protected from the rest of the world; when he practiced swordplay, there was never any danger of injuries with the sticks they had used. Now, however... Halbert was slowly beginning to realize that he had graduated beyond practice with the sword; it was time for him to begin using it. But there was one problem with the sword: it worked. Halbert had never intentionally killed, or even injured, anyone in the past, aside from the usual small fights a boy encounters back in Meids.

Don't die. Halbert stumbled over the rough ground, lost in his thoughts. He tried and failed to regain focus on the ground ahead of him; he knew it was important to be aware of his surroundings, but he wanted to think about what he was doing, rather than just doing it. He looked at his best friend, Filbert, who walked to his left. Filberth was as an older brother to Halbert; he frequently tried to imitate Filberth's mannerisms, in an attempt to see what was "normal". Halbert's social skills were relatively lacking in comparison to Filberth's, despite his best efforts. Filberth seemed focused on checking the ground in front of him to make sure it was safe, glancing around to look for enemies.

Enemies.

It only just hit Halbert - now he had enemies, people who wanted him dead. Foremost among them were outlaws; his mother had warned him to never trust the evil-doers of the north, or so she had called them. He had always taken her word for it; who was he to question what was right and what was wrong? All the same, he couldn't help but wonder: what if the outlaws were people, too? Could he really bring himself to kill people just like him, even if they wanted to kill him?

Don't die. If only it were that simple...




Halbert, my main character.





Filberth, one of my main secondary characters.







Note - sorry, the story is a sold wall of text this time. I wrote this about a year and a half after posting this; the buld was originally just intended to be a generic scene with my character, so the story doesn't match up that much with the build. All the same, the story is certainly better than the "story" that was originally posted here.


Scorecard:

Faction: Rainos

Season 1: Rise of the Boss:
LOM Character Intro: Halbert- 5 pts.
LOM- Secrets. FB- 2 pts.
LOM- Quest. FB- 2 pts.
LOM- Loss. FB- 2 pts.
TT Intro- A Long Journey- Winner- 10 pts.
TT Round 1: The Underground- 3 pts.
LOM UC: Tensions Rising- 5 pts.
TT Round 2: Halhi 141 vs. Chi Warrior: Unexpected Help- 4 pts.
LOM: Escape. FB- 2 pts.
TT R3: Halhi141 vs Adam Brunsting: Foul Play- 4 pts.
TT Round 4: Duel in the Ruins- 5 pts.
TT R5: Halhi141 vs Toa Infernum: Voyage- 4 pts.
LOM UC: Persuasion- Winner- 10 pts.
The Tourney: Average Gnome - 5 pts.
The Tourney: Third Place - 7 pts.
LOM: Pursuit. FB - 2 pts.
LOM UC: Fear Rises - 5 pts.
LOM Homepage Challenge entry - 5 pts.
LOM: A Battle at Sea Moc-off, 4 pts.
LOM UC: Trouble by the Inn Winner - 10 pts.
LOM Scorecard - 2 pts
LOM UC: An Unexpected Meeting - 5 pts.
LOM MBC: Answers (Part 1) - 4 pts.
LOM: Shadow Dragon. FB - 2 pts.
LOM Rank Challenge: Answers (Part 2) - 3 pts.
LOM UC/Guild Charter: The Travelers - 5 pts
LOM UC: New Alliances - 5 pts
LOM MBC: Rescue - 6 pts (expanded rubric)

Season 2: A Trap:
TT Intro: A Final Goodbye 2nd place - 8 pts
TT R1: Party in Guaire - 3 pts
TT R2: The School of an Enemy - 4 pts
TT R3: The Return of the Boss - 4 pts
TT R4: Mother Hulda - 5 pts
TT R5: Legacy of a Hero - 4 pts
LOM (April Fool's) UC: Scouting - 3 pts
The Tourney: Average GnomIIe - 5 points
The Tourney: Fourth Place - 5 points
LOM UC: Children at War - 5 pts
LOM MBC: Zelpunra's Tower - 5 pts (expanded rubric)
LOM UC: Battle of Exileseat - 5 pts
LOM UC: The Forbidden Castle - 10 pts (winner)
LOM MBC: Shipwrecked - 3 pts
LOM Rank Challenge: The Awakening - 3 pts
LOM: Abelot's Treehouse - 2 pts
LOM Rank Challenge: Hagron Swamp - 3 pts
LOM Rank Challenge: Journey's End - 3 pts
LOM Rank Challenge: Parting Ways - 3 pts
LOM UC: The Last Days - 5 pts

Total: 216 pts.


Ranks:

Adventurer
Guild Founder
Ambassador
Explorer
Seer
Baron




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The Cult of Ella Daily - Guild Points
Guild Founder - Halhi 141 - 2 pts
Guild Founder - Asad - 2 pts
Guild Founder - Mr. Cab - 2 pts
Mr. Cab - Moc-off win (against Timothy Post) - 3 pts
Mr. Cab - Moc-off loss (against Gilbert Despathens) - 1 pt
Total: 10 pts



Comments

  February 4, 2015
The "evil-doers of the north"... I like that. :P
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  February 4, 2015
Impressive story! You document your character's internal struggle well.
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  February 4, 2015
Great story, it is very well written. The build is an amusing addition, too. Nice job!
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  July 2, 2014
When did you shoot up to 89 points? That's insane :P
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  January 30, 2014
Gotta say it again--cool rocks.
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  December 31, 2013
Quoting Kai Bernstein This is quite neat, but the rockwork is a little /too/ crazy for my taste. Nice characters, though. :P
lol the number of times you edited that comment :P Thanks Kai!
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  December 23, 2013
Quoting Aloysius Carnell Wow... I could not hope to build rocks so true to nature... Fantastic!Your character is simple, but so effective. I wonder, is 'Halbert' derived from 'halberd'?
Nope, it's based on "Halhi". Thanks!
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  December 23, 2013
Wow... I could not hope to build rocks so true to nature... Fantastic!Your character is simple, but so effective. I wonder, is 'Halbert' derived from 'halberd'?
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  December 13, 2013
This is quite neat, but the rockwork is a little /too/ crazy for my taste. Nice characters, though. :P
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  November 29, 2013
Allow me to give you a delayed welcome to LoM! And great ground work!
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  November 16, 2013
Welcome to Mythron. It's very good to have you on our side. Oh and by the way, that rock work, it's just beautiful.
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  November 2, 2013
Again, great rock working and a very impressive wall.
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  October 20, 2013
Great rockwork and details on the wall!
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  October 18, 2013
Great intro and welcome to Mythron!
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  October 17, 2013
Very cool rocks.
  October 16, 2013
Also, expect to see Halbert in a coming build. :D
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  October 15, 2013
Epic! The rockwork looks awesome, but the foliage could have used a bit more color, or something. It looks a bit dull. Anyways, great job, and glad to have you on our side! :D
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  October 14, 2013
That rock work is awesome! Welcome to LOM!
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  October 14, 2013
Not bad, not bad. Welcome to LOM.
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  October 13, 2013
Fantastic work! I love those rocks!
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  October 13, 2013
Awesome! I love the rocks!
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  October 13, 2013
nice character intro! those rocks ...rock! lol.
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  October 12, 2013
Wonderful rocks!
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  October 12, 2013
Amazing Rocks! Cool character, too.
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  October 12, 2013
Fantastic rocks! What's really funny, though, is that this looks a little bit like my next MOC, but better. :P
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  October 12, 2013
Cool Intro. Fantastic rockwork, as usual!
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  October 12, 2013
Welcome to LOM! Great intro, and the rocks are beautiful! ~Brick
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  October 12, 2013
Awesome! Glad you've joined LoM :-)
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  October 12, 2013
Quoting MCLegoboy ! I thought you said you didn't like the LOM because everything looked too much alike. This is still cool looking though. I like the green bits.
Yeah, I changed my mind. I still am not a big fan of those builds that all look the same, but with this and my next LOM build I'm basically setting up a pretty interesting storyline with my character.
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  October 12, 2013
I thought you said you didn't like the LOM because everything looked too much alike. This is still cool looking though. I like the green bits.
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  October 12, 2013
I agree woth Alex, those rocks are definitely the hightlight! The rest of the build is still great! Halbert, huh? Sounds like Halhi! Nice!
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  October 12, 2013
Very cool! I can't get over those rocks; very well done!
 
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