I love how custom this moc is however it looks a little to exposed in my opinion if you could get some white armor on that thing it would look great but other than that I think you've got yourself an awesome self moc :)
Like i say no one can actually judge greebles to their extent because there so small minute changes that make big differences. But there seem to be a little to many greebles for my taste looks great but for me its a bit overdone. Some May like this degree of greebling so that's why I can say nobody can exactly judge greebles. greebles are your style that nobody else has so thats my input but this is great try to use more black 2length axels if you can. They don't sell them anymore in sets so if your collection started after the hordika there's no chance that will happen without a bricklink order.
Heeey, we're getting somewhere! :D You've done a better job with the color scheme and getting rid of the exposed technic bits. But the torso is a little to convoluted for my liking, but if you like greebles, stick with it. I'm really digging the legs, but the arms can use some work, as in adding more armor. But I do have to hand it to you for making this dude mostly custom! I'm looking forward to seeing more from you. And there's nothing wrong with being a KFOL. Best to start somewhere, right?
Nice! I do think you need a basic color scheme. For instance, it has dark blue, trans blue, and light blue. Maybe just choose one of them instead of using all of them. But I think it still looks nice. Nice custom limbs. Also, I finished your self moc. I might change a few bits and pieces, but I will hopefully post him soon! =^.^=