This is a alright MOC, the legs are really good, I mainly say that the upper arm are not that good but it fits with this one and like that you didn't made the lower arm and legs custom. The body is somewhat okay but the chest armor looks really odd but the mask fits great with the MOC. The weapon I don't have anything to say but that it's just good.
And I STILL can't get over how amazing this looks! *Gouges eyes out because he'll never see anything so awesome*. I like how you kept her height the same especially (Hobbit Toa: Making Vorred even more epik since the beginning of Bionicle).