MOCpages : Share your LEGO® creations
LEGO models my own creation MOCpages toys shop A.I.L.C. Se. 2 Ep. 10 DividedAdventurers
Welcome to the world's greatest LEGO fan community!
Explore cool creations, share your own, and have lots of fun together.  ~  It's all free!
A.I.L.C. Se. 2 Ep. 10 Divided
Here it is! Sorry it took so long my uploader didn't work! A.I.L.C. = Adventures in lightning city. The dialogue is underneath each photo. I Hope you like it!
About this creation

1

Jacob opened the door and they went onto the hatch.


2

Seth: Umm... Any lights?

Jacob: Whoa! Tripped over something!


3

Adam: Ummm... here's the light switch!


4

Jacob: Aaaa... That's better!


5

Jacob: This place must be connected to the underground city!


6
Jacob: There are two bunker rooms over there!


7

Jacob: The men are in that bunker and the women are in the other one!


8

Seth: Why?


9

Jacob: Ummm... I just might have... maybe... because of Chris... kind-of transported their clothes off...


10

Seth: What!? All of them!?


11

Jacob: No! Just their shirts.... hopefully... so Seth and Adam don't go into the girls bunker...just...hhhhhh....I am so mad at my self! I just...erg!

Seth: *laughing*

Jacob: Stop!


12

Adam: So... what do we do now?


13

Jacob: I'm not sure... Hey look clothes!


14

Jacob: Cloie, can you put these on the girls and I will put these on all the boys! Very convenient!


15

Cloie: Sure.

She walked away.


16

Seth: I think she misses Chris for some reason.


17

Jacob: Well duh! Did you see the look on their faces? I think it was love at first sight!

Seth: What? She was pointing a bow and arrow at him!

Jacob: So? Some relationships start off kind of weird, it can still work!


18

Adam: What relationship? I went through a wormhole just like the one he went through! As far as we know he is in another time frame, And far, far away! You guy's are acting like he's on a short trip! We should just go on and forget Chris for now! we have other problems!


19

Jacob: Don't say that!! If he's out there than he could be found! To me he is on a short trip, because I will find him! we need Chris more than ever! So don't tell me To forget about him!


20

Jacob: Got it?


21

Jacob Went to the men's bunker.


22

Adam: Whatever! We need to do something about the Clang!


23

Seth: I agree, I think we can catch them off guard!

Adam: But what about us crashing a big ship into a mountain!


24

Seth: Nobody saw that!

Adam: The captain of that ship's still alive!


25

Seth: Oh... They all know about us!


26

Jacob and Cloie came back.


27

Jacob: Yes! But they don't know who we are, as far as they know we're just some new people who got through the force-field! But ummm... who comes to this planet other than Clang and us?


28

Seth: I do.

Adam: So Jacob,You were eves dropping?


29

Jacob: You can hear everything in those bunkers!


30

Seth: So we do what?

Jacob: Nothing.

Seth: "Nothing"?!

Jacob: We are safe here and we need to stay here with the people!


31

Seth: Then me and Adam and Cloie are going to do something about these Clang!


32

Jacob: But the-


33

Cloie: No.

Seth: What?


34

Cloie: I'm not going.

Seth: Why?


35

Cloie: I don't even know what I'm doing here! Maybe it was love at first sight or something... But that's gone and Chris is gone! And I don't know half of everything that's going on! *under her breath* And you don't ether!


35

Jacob: Your going to go back to your hut?

Cloie: Yes.

Jacob: That's very far. I can go with you if you like.

Cloie: I'll manage, besides you need to stay here with ummm... your people. bye.


36


And she left.



37

Adam: It's time for me and Seth to go too.

Jacob: Good luck.


38

They left.


39

Jacob: Well... It's just me... I wonder what this underground bunker was used for.


-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


40

James: How is the engines holding out Tom?


41

Tom: Not very good good captain! They keep screaming!

James: Yes I know! I hear it!


42

Tom: Well I'll take a look here... ah ha! I just need to cut this and- Oops!!

James: What?


43

Computer: Warning E.E.B. Emergency Escape Bridge activated.


44

James: No...

James ran to the bridge.


45

James: Mr. One, turn it of!!

Mr. One: working on it!


46

James: I shouldn't have added this on!


47

Computer: 1,...2,...3,...


48

James: Hurry!!


49

Computer: 4,...5.


50

James: Ahhh!


51

The ship separated.


52

Commander: Wiz you saved them from blowing up!

Commander: Wiz?


53

Commander: *Sniff* *Sniff* Why do you have to be so brave!


54

To be continued...

Last episode / Next episode

A.I.L.C.

Thanks for taking a look!

please rate and comment

~Nick~



Comments

 I made it 
  May 11, 2014
Thanks that sounds great! I would totally read it!
 I like it 
  May 10, 2014
Wait, how did that guy die? Guess I will have to read the next episode to find out. Just click the... Wait, I'm caught up?!? Nooooo! Now I have to wait for the next one! Great episode, hopefully I can get my own comic series started over the summer. I'm probably going to have to build some building first, but I could use more of those for town displays anyway.
 I made it 
  April 8, 2014
I know. Thanks for telling me!
 I like it 
  April 8, 2014
Hey Nick I found Chris is on Cyber Frank's Alta-5 ! :-)
 I like it 
  March 9, 2014
I have left a comment in the group!
 I like it 
  February 28, 2014
if people read the story back from the start it might pay off, but, you don t have many readers, consider this serie an experiment, where you make your good and bad shots, what works and does nt, I ll help you by being honest, be patient, and your next one will rock, you have good elements, decent skills at many areas, but, you need better looking scenes, and more action, some subtle changes too, like; making many frames of action, an action sequence should be more than one frame, it will beat 10 frames of talkative narration or interaction between characters, interest in characters comes from the action that defines them, you ll get these hints in time.
 I made it 
  February 25, 2014
Quoting cyberfrank 2010 it s a good joke, but, because we don t get to see the characters naked, it has much less impact, try to make the jokes visual, if it s just in text, it does nt work as good, you have to be pretty obvious for it to work, ex; you show the characters before the transport normal... next pic, they re naked, it can t be missed, to have people s attention, you have to give them visuals, great scenes, action, effects, in every episodes, that s why you have a hard time to have readers, you kept the same main pic too long, just try this; make an action scene, make it look great, and put it as your main pic next time, comic books NEVER have the same cover on each issue! they just put their usual title.
I see. Thanks! I will try all of that...maybe not the naked photo unless you think it can still fit in now?
 I like it 
  February 25, 2014
it s a good joke, but, because we don t get to see the characters naked, it has much less impact, try to make the jokes visual, if it s just in text, it does nt work as good, you have to be pretty obvious for it to work, ex; you show the characters before the transport normal... next pic, they re naked, it can t be missed, to have people s attention, you have to give them visuals, great scenes, action, effects, in every episodes, that s why you have a hard time to have readers, you kept the same main pic too long, just try this; make an action scene, make it look great, and put it as your main pic next time, comic books NEVER have the same cover on each issue! they just put their usual title.
 I like it 
  February 19, 2014
That's cool that the bridge can separate . Great episode.
 I like it 
  February 19, 2014
great scene, and you ve got nice guns too!
 
By Nick White
Add to my favorite builders

6
people like this. See who.

258 visitors
10 comments
Added February 19, 2014
 


LEGO models my own creation MOCpages toys shop A.I.L.C. Se. 2 Ep. 10 DividedAdventurers


You Your home page | LEGO creations | Favorite builders
Activity Activity | Comments | Creations
Explore Explore | Recent | Groups
MOCpages is an unofficial, fan-created website. LEGO® and the brick configuration are property of The LEGO Group, which does not sponsor, own, or endorse this site.
©2002-2014 Sean Kenney Design Inc | Privacy policy | Terms of use