Curse you Java. If I didn't have to use the simple uploader, these pictures would be much prettier. Bah humbug.
No more hiding. No more running. The traveling warrior has found what she is looking for. And she's bringing hell to anyone who stands in her way.
The skirt is removable too, but I prefer it on. Looks better to me.
Comparison with Mags.
Creator's Comments: Malia is one of my older characters and one I became rather attached to. I've added her into my storyline, though I've yet to write it out completely yet.
As far as the revamp is concern, there are some things I'd like to fix, but I like her. Not much else to say really. Finding that's a recent trend for me. Not such a bad thing.
The skirt adds to the female form greatly, it creates a flow of the hips that isn't there when it's gone. The physique is somewhat interrupted by the area above the Kohrak Shields, it tapers inward again, and looks off. I like the *er-herm* breast technique, though I also think it should be placed a mite lower, giving her a little more collar and neck room. You're specialty, armoring, is wonderful once again, you've managed to fit all those different pieces together to seem like they are all part of one bigger piece of armor, it works very well. Sadly, I don't see much armor on the back of the legs... You know, one of these days I'd love to do a collab with you, build a frame and send it to you so you can finish it, maybe sending a frame back and me finishing it. That sounds fun.
Yay, no more Rahkshi head (wait, I already remember her with that mask...)! Ha ha, so glad that you keeped her assembled! To be honest, she looks incredibly amazing right now. That skirt makes me jealous, looks so great. Anyways, as always, let's start with the points I don't like as I always do, okey? Hmm... That 'laser mace' doesn't suit her. Aaaaaand... That's it, I think. Yeah. She's perfect. Love the hair, the shape of the legs, the piston at the back so well covered, the use of those rubber bands for detailing... My favourite thing by far of this form (along with the skirt) is the fact that you didn't make her as slim as usually are the fe-MOCs, but she doesn't look fat either: she just looks strong and trained, as every warrior should look! Love that so much. So, my dear Gale, perfect work with this lady. Keep like this! <3
I agree with Gringat in that she looks feminine while keeping feminine features, something that not many people can pull off. Also, the legs are a work of wonder. But there are some poses that aren't as good as the others, namely the second picture. I am not too crazy about her back either. But all in all, very well done.
Swapping out the rahkshi head for a mask was a good move, I think. She looks bigger, stronger and much more formidable than before, without sacrificing her feminine appearance. The detail on her armour is great and I really love the skirt you added. Also, chubbiness ftw :3
Before I go any further, I want to say that this is overall a nice MOC. Now, on to business. The technique for the breasts is interesting, and it looks nice, but I think that too many people will attempt to copy it on MOCs that don't work well with it. Also, since some people tend to use silver as armor and other colors as "skin", it seems like she has fully armored arms and legs and then only has a bra on her torso. Or maybe that's just me. Or you planned it. :P