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I'm baaaack. And now you must READ. :P
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Things weren't going well. Ever since the news of the regicide, Frazer, the undercover Myrthronian who'd washed up on Invadir's shores, was building up resentment for Enalica. To him, Outlaws and Enalicans were the primary suspects for Black Lotus members, and he was beginning to blow his cover in public every now and then. Speaking out against Enalicans in random bursts of fury. He was being watched very closely now by spies in Infordest. And Cazzmir was beginning to think his 'journey to Mythron' was just a stupid fantasy.
"Cazzmir!" A voice called behind him.



Diana. He suppressed a groan. He wasn't in the mood to talk to her now. Not after everything that happened. He just wanted to be alone. Why did she have to be so outgoing all of the time? It got annoying after a few months of bugging him.



"I've been . . . trying to find you." She panted, out of breath from running. "You told me you . . . planned to give me a lesson . . . on archery. You said I . . . needed to learn a way . . . to defend myself."
Cazzmir remembered. It hadn't even been his idea. It was his father's.
The girl needs a friend, He'd said. Spend some time with her.
Cazzmir didn't want to spend time with her. He didn't want to teach her archery. He wanted to mope alone in the woods with his new crossbow. Leave it to his father to get him into this. . . .



Cazzmir kept walking. "Forget about it." He called over his shoulder. "I don't have time. Why don't you . . . go feed pigs or something? I'm busy."
"But—I thought—" Diana's ever-present smile vanished.
"You thought wrong. Just . . . leave me alone." Cazzmir muttered.



Diana turned and trudged back the other way. She didn't know what to think of Cazzmir. Sometimes he was just an angry, infuriating beast. And others . . . well, she couldn't recall any other times right then. Maybe getting involved with the Velmonts was foolish from the start, just like her parents had told her when she went running home telling them all about her new 'friends.' Maybe she should just go feed pigs. At least they didn't yell at her without warning.



"Going somewhere little girl?" A blade was suddenly right up in her face.
Diana gasped and stumbled backward at the sight of an armed woman, and her accomplace beside her. "Wh—who—"
"Friend of Cazzmir's? That's a mistake you're going to regret." She sneered.



A scream ripped through the silence of the forest. Cazzmir whirled around, bow raised. "DIANA!"
She was fine. If you didn't count the gold-hilted sword held at her throat.
Cazzmir's heart froze in his chest. Who were these people?



"Velmont!" The woman shouted. "Remember me? I didn't think so. After all, you were very young when we took you from your homeland."
Cazzmir's eyes widened.
"That's right." She nodded. "I was there. I am Reia Loda. Arvon's sister. You didn't think you could get away with killing him without my knowing, did you? Of course, it's The Masked who has the blood on his hands, and he's not here. But you're the next best thing."



Cazzmir's mind was reeling. Sister? That monster had a sister? How could he not know? How could he be so foolish to think that Arvon wouldn't have any friends or relatives who'd be thirsty for revenge?
"Diana isn't a part of this. Let her go." Cazzmir snapped.



Reia laughed a cold, menacing laugh. "And lose my leverage? I don't think so."
"What do you want?" Cazzmir growled.
"It's simple. We want you. Turn yourself over, and we might free her. It's your choice. Take it or leave it." She smiled. "I also thought you'd like to know how I'm here. When we looted your home in Meids, Arvon chose power. I chose the high-life. A secret high-life, where I could live in perfect solitude. But all that ended when Arvon died. My home was destroyed by rebels, little fools who've hated me for stealing their land. As if they had anything better to do with it. Now I'm on the run. And it's all your fault. I'm going to make you feel my pain. And I'll enjoy every last bit of it."



It happened too fast to comprehend. Diana threw her hands forward, blasting pure energy into her attackers. One landed in the grass to her right. Reia sprawled forward into the path, her sword thunking uselessly into the dirt.
"SORCERY!" She spluttered in rage.
Cazzmir tore himself out of his amazement. He knew Diana had a gift in magic. But he didn't know she was this good. Looks like she had a way to defend herself after all.



"COME ON!" Cazzmir grabbed her arm, and they sprinted away, Reia spouting curses behind them.
"THIS ISN'T OVER!" She screamed, fumbling for her sword. "I'LL KILL EVERY LAST PERSON YOU LOVE IF I CAN'T GET MY HANDS ON YOU!"



They had to stop after running for ten whole minutes, gasping for breath.
"Are you hurt?" Cazzmir reached for her.
She brushed him off angrily. "I guess you only care about me when my life's in danger." She stormed off into the woods. "Why don't you go feed some pigs?!"



Cazzmir wanted to call her back, but stopped himself. It didn't matter if she hated him. All the better. Reia would't go after Diana if he wasn't with her. And now . . . he had to do everything he could to protect his friends and family. Reia might not have the power she once did. But she had enough. Enough to tear his life in two.



Bonus pic. Not much to show. :P

Anyway, yes, I've returned. And I'm adding to my LOM story. New villains, new plot, you know the drill. So, more to come soon! And thanks for reading!



Comments

 I made it 
  October 29, 2014
Quoting Julia LeeP So you are a writer as well, and a good one at that. Too bad it seems as if you have kind of disappeared from the building scene, but if you ever feel like building/writing again, I'll be waiting ;)
Well, not completely. I've been working on a little something called The Curse of the Crystal Bane. Keep your eyes peeled. ;P
 I like it 
  October 29, 2014
So you are a writer as well, and a good one at that. Too bad it seems as if you have kind of disappeared from the building scene, but if you ever feel like building/writing again, I'll be waiting ;)
 I like it 
  May 18, 2014
And so another player begins to craft a lover story.... What a mistake. :P
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  May 15, 2014
Quoting Kai Bernstein Nice story, though the build looks like a toned-down version of Siezure; too reminiscent. :P
Yeah, I noticed that. >.> I guess it's those green slopes mostly. :P
 I made it 
  May 15, 2014
Quoting Lindel Baskin Nice story! The build looks great as well, nice foliage. Keep up the good work, Armon! =)
Thanks Lindel!
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  May 15, 2014
Nice story, though the build looks like a toned-down version of Siezure; too reminiscent. :P
 I like it 
  May 14, 2014
Nice story! The build looks great as well, nice foliage. Keep up the good work, Armon! =)
 I made it 
  May 14, 2014
Quoting Thomas of Tortuga Nice work on the story! Now I need to go read your stories again to remember how everyone fits together :P I feel like the tan and regular green is a bit too patchy on the path, though- maybe if you made the path different shades of tan or of green?
You go do that. ;) Yeah, it kinda is. Different shades of green probably would've worked if I had more dark green. :P
 I made it 
  May 14, 2014
Quoting Freddie Z. Cool story brosis.
Thanks. :P
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  May 14, 2014
Quoting Brick Mood Nice!
Thanks, man!
 I like it 
  May 14, 2014
Nice work on the story! Now I need to go read your stories again to remember how everyone fits together :P I feel like the tan and regular green is a bit too patchy on the path, though- maybe if you made the path different shades of tan or of green?
 I like it 
  May 14, 2014
Cool story brosis.
 I like it 
  May 14, 2014
Nice!
 I made it 
  May 14, 2014
Quoting Matt W. Wow, you are a good story writer! Anyways, nice MOC bro, a little plain, tho. My only complaint is that the path is a bit grassy as opposed to the " more wooded" area. All in all, good job!
Haha, thanks. ;) And yeah, I didn't want to start on something big so soon, so it's plain.
 I made it 
  May 14, 2014
Quoting Timothy Post Nice MOC
Thanks, Timothy.
 I like it 
  May 14, 2014
Wow, you are a good story writer! Anyways, nice MOC bro, a little plain, tho. My only complaint is that the path is a bit grassy as opposed to the " more wooded" area. All in all, good job!
 I like it 
  May 14, 2014
Nice MOC
 I made it 
  May 14, 2014
Whoa, wait. You read the whole thing? Wow, thanks, Stephen! :D
 I made it 
  May 14, 2014
Quoting Eve Daniels Excellent build! The story was awesome as well. And welcome back!
Thanks so much!
 I made it 
  May 14, 2014
Quoting Stephen Boe Nice landscaping! I love those trees! Also, why was I kicked from the Legends of the Ops group? I read the book, it was amazing! In fact, I actually was going to search it on wikipedia, but I forgot it's not to that level of fame or whatever.
Lol thanks. And sorry man, the group was because I was going to make a LEGO version, but I decided not to. Cause I don't really have the time or pieces. I kinda just took everyone out because there wasn't really any purpose to having anyone in there, anymore. Guess I should've told everyone. :P Sorry.
 I like it 
  May 14, 2014
Excellent build! The story was awesome as well. And welcome back!
 I made it 
  May 14, 2014
Quoting Freeling ++ Nice one!
Thanks!
 I like it 
  May 14, 2014
Nice landscaping! I love those trees! Also, why was I kicked from the Legends of the Ops group? I read the book, it was amazing! In fact, I actually was going to search it on wikipedia, but I forgot it's not to that level of fame or whatever.
  May 14, 2014
Nice one!
 
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