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Mission 1: Rahi Hunt
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Hi everyone. This is the first part of my monthly mission. The second part will be posted eventually, when I get time. I am up in the mountains for the next 6 days, so I will do what I can. I experimented with a comic strip format, so tell me if you dig it. Also, the title pic is a teaser from Part 2, so stay tuned!
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 I made it 
  July 3, 2014
Quoting Toa Chains This is excellent! The editing was well done and the actual builds were quite good! I only have three problems and those are that there could have been a overview of all the matoran (but you might be saving that for part 2), sometimes it was hard to tell which order people talked in and some of the letters were cut off by the side of the box. Also I really like this comic format! Overall a very great creation and I'm very excited for part 2!
Thank you! And yes, you guessed correctly. Part 2 will be adding more characters, so I won't do overviews until the end. I see what you mean about the diolouge bubbles. The sizes and shapes of the photos determined their places on each page, so that couldn't be helped too much. Part 2 will be in a more standard format, since the comic thing was so time consuming. I'm glad you liked it!
 I made it 
  July 3, 2014
Quoting Toa Gigavolt Dude, how on earth did you make that comic book format? It really brought it all together. Also, the hunting squad looks awesome! All around, awesome.
Thank you. The format comes from a comic maker app on my I pad. It was hard enough to complete this with everything on my iPad, let alone if I had had to transfer to multiple computers! I don't think I will be doing it again, at least not for part 2, which will take enough time as it is.
 I like it 
  June 28, 2014
Dude, how on earth did you make that comic book format? It really brought it all together. Also, the hunting squad looks awesome! All around, awesome.
 I like it 
  June 28, 2014
Fantastic job all around. The Matoran builds are nice and solid, as is the build of the Rahi. The editing was fantastic. Story was great. You have put a lot of effort into the mission. I look forward to seeing what you do next. Score: 10 TA points.
  June 28, 2014
This is excellent! The editing was well done and the actual builds were quite good! I only have three problems and those are that there could have been a overview of all the matoran (but you might be saving that for part 2), sometimes it was hard to tell which order people talked in and some of the letters were cut off by the side of the box. Also I really like this comic format! Overall a very great creation and I'm very excited for part 2!
 
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