Metal Legion HQ wants General Vartok, it is the team s mission to bring him alive,
aided by an informant, they find that he salvaged an abandoned factory,
after suppressing the surface opposition, they now raid the underground
part of the factory...
When Vartok invaded my town 5 years ago, he had already killed half with his experiments,
that wiped out my family and friends, last year, I had organised a team of resolved
people like me, and found where he established his lair...
We caught him completely by surprise, and killed many greenies that could have
attacked other towns, his scientists led us under menace, to get to him,
but the traps killed both scientists and my friends...
We were 15 when we reached Vartok s lab, from which he never leaves,
but, his personal guards, and Avalanche, had the better on us,
we were experimented on, I m the only one who survived and escape.
How did you escape?
The last experiment I went trough killed me,
or... maybe I went into coma...
all I know is, that I woke up amongst dead people.
After months of captivity, I came to know a part of the base very well,
but I don t know all of it.
COMMANDER IRON FIST;
And this is the shortest way?
..And the safest that I know of,
stay close to the wall here!
What is the trap?
I m impressed!
My friend Jammie fell in that one!
don t make a sound!
We arrived at the part that I told you would nt like...
What are you talking about?
we have been dodging spiders for hours,
besides, they are more scared than us...
Those are nothing, I meant those!!!
Small arms have no effect!
I can t use explosive arrows if you re too close to them!
get back, I will give you some time!
Neat plot line here, cyberfrank! I really admire how well you build the scenes that go with your stories; not many people take the time and care like you to make it look amazing! So excellent work! Hope they avoid those spiders! 5/5! :-)
Quoting Marc "Edge" R.unde
thanks Marc! I have a system, I keep the props assembled in a box, I keep boxes with different themes, like; industrial, commercial, residential, ect... so, when my scene is ready, I add the props, it s expensive to keep props assembled, but, it s worth it in time saved.
Okay, I read it quickly the first time to absorb the general atmosphere. Then, I came back and went thru words and build reading and viewing with more attention to detail. You can miss some things the first time. Well, the thing that really caught my eye and has be questioning, perhaps even worried or suspicious is that... Mc Sniper has been EXPERIMENTED ON and survived. I can forsee future ramifications due to all that! You know I'll be watching! Oh, love the look of the corriders and bays in red leading to the lab! :)
Awesome! The mechanical spider attack was fantastic! I really like the forklift design, very streamlined. I seriously can't believe you have as many stories going on at the same time. Mind boggling! Great job!