I think it's very good. Here's what you should do: instead of a blurry shot from the pilot's point of view, make the main picture an overall shot of the whole ship so we can see everything, like your second picture. If you have a good plain background, then people will be more likely to click on it. Just try not to make it too dark or blurry. Also, adding captions might be a good idea, even if they only say what the picture is.