I will try to be constructive here. You may want to get some plates or bricks and find a way to make a curved shape, perhaps with hinges. See Mark Kelso's page for inspiration. I never thought of the Death Star as a cylinder, but oh well. Nice try. Keep building!
Anthony stop! tell him how it is. THIS IS NOT WHAT MOC PAGES IS ABOUT! you post creations. Creations that you worked so hard on! If you earn a 5 on THIS why doesn't everyone else get 5s on ALL of their creations?
ALL YOU WHO REVIEW THIS BAD GO TO THE MIDDLE OF THE EARTH!!!! (I can't say this on MOCPAGES)
Dude listen James. Never give up no matter what people say to you. Their just so rude and don't know what they are doing. Keep your head up and your heart alive, and keep on building!
P.S. All I said was from the middle of my heart.
P.S.S. You are a great builder
P.S.S.S You could work for LEGO someday
P.S.S.S.S I should stop now...