The villian (as he obviously is and Ajota will lose fan respect if he does not recegnize the chap as evil) is predictable and I'm afraid the buildings look rather pre-fabricated, being mostly plates. People love walls with a lot of angle to them so you might try that.
Some of the pics at the beggining were blury, but i know that all the others were meant to be because of the drug they shot into Ajota. I agree with the guy below me, i also think the skeleton guy is lying.
Very good comic but I have a question. Is the time when Ajotas eyes were blurry was that your excuse for bad pics? I didn't think that skele dude would turn out to be a jedi... I personally think that he is lying