"Those who betray others betray only themselves." Don't you dare give Ajota a mechanical hand. Cool chaps like Tenel Ka and Wolf Sazen didn't get replacements, they just went it one-handed, and Ajota looks like he's ambidexterous here. Scenery could be improved and the 'take down the Empire' really clashes with the 'join me'. In fact, dialogue (the thing I have the most trouble writing) could be improved in this scene.
Gotta agree, the right hand getting cut off is an old cliche. But as long as you don't take yourself too seriously you're good. If you try to write a stirring drama, but you use a lot of cliche's, it probably won't come out right. But if you make it clear that your story is just for fun, you can have drama and cliche together without so much trouble. :)
Bah, there goes my author side again...
I like it
May 3, 2008
At last, another LOTJ Comic: I always thought Ajota would go to the dark side: I like the Darth Aneurus, Aneurus is taken off aneurism.
Cant wait for next one.