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 I made it 
  July 3, 2010
AJ here, checking in for the first time in like 2 years for epic nostalgia. @jonathan glass, of course i don't take myself seriously, i'm making comics out of legos lol.
  May 24, 2008
"Those who betray others betray only themselves." Don't you dare give Ajota a mechanical hand. Cool chaps like Tenel Ka and Wolf Sazen didn't get replacements, they just went it one-handed, and Ajota looks like he's ambidexterous here. Scenery could be improved and the 'take down the Empire' really clashes with the 'join me'. In fact, dialogue (the thing I have the most trouble writing) could be improved in this scene.
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  May 24, 2008
A how do you make ur decals B what is the hold up with no18 on the jedi thing.
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  May 9, 2008
Awesomeness| Yes,that is a word.
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  May 4, 2008
Finally! I wonder what's gonna happen to Tracker, mostly because he's my favourite character. Oh, about the hand...
 I like it 
  May 4, 2008
Gotta agree, the right hand getting cut off is an old cliche. But as long as you don't take yourself too seriously you're good. If you try to write a stirring drama, but you use a lot of cliche's, it probably won't come out right. But if you make it clear that your story is just for fun, you can have drama and cliche together without so much trouble. :) Bah, there goes my author side again...
A.J. Campbell
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Nathan Alger
  May 3, 2008
At last, another LOTJ Comic: I always thought Ajota would go to the dark side: I like the Darth Aneurus, Aneurus is taken off aneurism. Cant wait for next one.
 I like it 
  May 3, 2008
Great work, as usual! But yeh, you could've made his arm get cut off instead... But great story!
 I like it 
  May 3, 2008
4 because of the un-originality [the right hand getting cut off...how many times has that been used?]
 
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