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11) Bionicle Epic 2008: A Visitor From The Past (Part I)
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Komorro is aiding Tohuka is mastering his skills as a Toa Kuelu when they are ambushed by an old accomplice with a serious chip on his shoulder.
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Komorro is currently instructing Tohuka in honing his focus on his weapon, now infused with the chaos blade, within the desolace of the Ruined Farmstead.



Komorro: Tohuka, it will take time, but focus on the aura of your sword. It's aura is no longer good nor evil, but pure power. What you do with it will determine its affiliation.
Tohuka: ...



Komorro: Good, I can sense your weapon responding. Keep at it.



Tohuka: Komorro...



Komorro: Yes?
Tohuka: Faint Presence. Behind you.



Komorro catches the agressor's arm with his armor-spines.

Komorro: I can't sense you... How...



Komorro then pushes him off onto the lower rise of the structure they're on.



Tohuka: It's a protodyte signature(protodytes (Lego Company's idea) are tiny particles that compose a body which allows the user to break apart and reform at will. Zaktan from Lego's Piraka series could do this). It's very difficult to trace.
Komorro: So that's what that is.



Agressor: ...YOU!!



Tohuka: !! Oh my.... Lanuro....
Tohuka was still, not sure what to say.



Komorro: Tohuka?



Komorro: What is that thing?
Tohuka: I'll explain later, but he used to be one of us.



Tohuka: What is it, Lanuro?
Lanuro: I've come for Minokshii and Majokshii!



Lanuro: It is Mukraatan's will that these traitors be punished!



Komorro: Well guess what, you can't have 'em!



Komorro: DISTORTION!!

Komorro uses a special power to manipulate the sunlight. In doing so, he forces it through Lanuro's molecular structure, thereby breaking him apart.



Komorro: Minokshii, ye shall live another day.



Tohuka: ...
Komorro: If there's one thing I know about protodyte beings, is that intense heat from sunlight burns them apart.
Unknown Voice: Not these protodytes...



Lanuro: I got you!
Lanuro, claws dripping with poison, digs into Tohuka's armor.
Tohuka: Argh!!



In a fit of rage, Tohuka counterattacks with the hilt of his sword...



Knocking Lanuro onto his back.



Lanuro: Is this any way to greet an old apprentice, teacher?



Tohuka: I don't want to do this, Lanuro.



Tohuka: I still care about you as a student.



Lanuro: You toa didn't come after me. That tells me how much you care.
Tohuka: We thought you were dead! Wait!

Lanuro activates a ball of poison based energy...



Burning it in an explosion to create a shockwave, throwing Tohuka backwards, landing him on top of Komorro.



Tohuka: You leave me no choice, I'm sorry.
He takes on his light form...



... And performs a technique he calls the Endless Slashes, a technique where he moves at near-light speed, attacking multiple times with his sword...



... Before skidding back in front of his target and coming out of light-form.



Lanuro: ....
Tohuka: Hurts, doesn't it?



The Endless Slashes move worked, and Lanuro's wings, mask, and most of his limbs fell severed to the ground.



Lanuro: So this is how it's gonna be, Tohuka? Alright then, once I find Minokshii and his giant pet, I'll be back to kill you, just you watch.

Lanuro vanishes, body parts and everything.



Tohuka: You ok?
Komorro: Fine, fine. Your technique with your light-form has improved, even from the little time we've spent training.



Tohuka: Thank you. Alert your minions to keep a lookout for Lanuro, I'm off to Leithe to get a cure for the scratch Lanuro gave me. Once I'm finished with Leithe, I'll tell you everything.
Komorro: I'm looking forward to it.

-TO BE CONTINUED-



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