this is a base under attack from clone forces. the three humans are jedi master arlin zey(if he died i apolajize)his friend farl, and a technichin. zey escaped order 66 and found a bunck of deactivaded cis droids he reactivated them but now his little fortress is under assult......
About this creation
overview of portion
overview of other portion
internal vehicle bay with spider droid and turret
man the wall defences
more wall defences
last wall defence
they found the secret entrance
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Pretty good idea. It's a good start, excellent thorough setup, and if you put some more work into it, it'll kick major tail! However, you lose one point from self-rating. I'm sorry but it just makes you look bad. Another for the color scheme, which needs to be more coordinated (if you don't have enough parts with identical colors, that's understandable, but you can spray paint them.) And are those official lego sets mixed in with the base? If they are, I'd recommend not doing that because, though I know it's with the separatist theme, they don't count as mocs. Hope this helped, but do some more with aesthetics, make your own unique tanks, and upload a V2. I'm looking forward to seeing it!