Well here it is, the next installment of moctag. Grab some snacks and enjoy the show.
Doctor: Well Rory, you are one very lucky chicken. I'm afraid however that you will need a beak job. So you'll have to choose a new one. And I'm sorry to say we are all out of orange beaks.
Kassandra: Rory, I'm going to call Black C. now. Don't worry we'll get the Chickenator and then I can get back to the set of Bonktron invasion 2 so we can get even wealthier!
As Kassandra left the room, Doctor Sparkle reveals his true identity as the Chickenator!
Chickenator: I told you I'd be bawk. And now it's time to die.
*Meanwhile back in the future*
Max noob: Hey Cluckers! Look what I found.
Cluckers: What does that do?
Max noob: Only one way to find out! *click*
It turns out Max noob somehow managed to press the "Stop the Chickenator from killing Rory just in time and protect Rory" button.
Just when everything was fine and dandy everything takes a turn for the worst.
As Rory walked out of the hospital, he saw a striking scene.
Black C: This is payback for clucking around with my wife while I was in the military all those years! I've kidnapped Kassandra and there's nothing you can do about it!
Will Rory be able to get his wife back? Will the Chickenator help Rory with his troubles? Will Kassandra ever be able to get back to Bonktron invasion 2? Will Rory get his old nose back? Will something utterly unrelated happen? Well, that is all up to Matt S. because he is it!
So far I have really enjoyed the series. I thought it did get a little confusing along some lines though. In this one I tried to keep it simple, solve some problems, but at the same time keep things going and keep it fun and interesting throughout. But everyone gets to do whatever they want with the series. You can really make anything happen. I am really lacking pieces at the moment so I couldn't really make fantastic scenery, but I think it turned out alright.
To be honest I took pictures with very little idea of how to continue the story. So I got some extra pictures. I really didn't know what this one is all about. But I was thinking the Matrix.
Again, I don't know what to say about this one. It just didn't quite fit in.
Wow, I have been out of the loop for a while. Things were just too complex and what not. So, let me see if I got it right: everything is solved ACCEPT the fact that his old friend stole his wife. Right? Okay. On to #13. Anyways, great job. Very clean.
Well, it appears I missed two MOC tag installments on my trip! I enjoyed this one because it resolved several issues in Rory's life (I was starting to lose track of how many conflicts there were). Very well done! C ya~ElNickre
Well done, and thanks for cleaning up some of those loose ends - now if somebody would just kill off the dang chicken; this is starting to feel like a soap-opera. Lee.
I like it
August 15, 2008
Good to see Rory still in action. I seriously considering getting my hands greasy and frying up some chicken. That's right. Shaddix could very possibly be throwing down for some MOCtag. Great work here. Love the SNOT. Wonderful photography. And I am going to have to agree with Phipson (just this once, don't let it go to your head there Christina). The cannibalistic chickens would have been great!
Congratulations!!!! Despite getting the "Wagging Finger of Doom," you really got the story back on track, which was no small feat given how chaotic things have gotten. You kept the events clear and managable (not to mention squeaking in some good humor...have to admit the button cracked me up!), with a good cliffhanger to boot. My interest in the MOCtag storyline has been rekindled. Really well done!
Next person to actually manage to keep it within four lines gets a big old cheesy A-OK sign from me. All the rest of you punks get the skunkeye and Wagging Finger of Doom. I do heartily approve of your kidnapping cliffhanger, though.
you really should have found a way to work in the cannibalistic chickens. That would have been great. I think that whole "four line" rule got thrown out the window a while ago. No complaints out of me though, you delivered on this one big time! The new plot twists, the reveal of and then the resolution of the chickenator (and for the record, it was "I'll BEAK back." orignially you guys) and then the cliffhanger! Well done. Well done indeed. ~ Chris.