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04: What Creeps in Darkness
"This man's end is close at hand...will he fall or will he stand...his hope is one of self redemption...oh wouldn't that be grand?"
About this creation
01: Plunder
02: "I Give to the Living Before it is Lost"
03: Am I alone?

For three days I wandered through the wilderness driven by a false sense of excitement. I fruitlessly scavenged for clues of the existence of another. Little did I realize how pitiful my effort was; I traveled hours upon end, only to realize that I was back again where my hiking began...I cursed at the gray sky in agony and frustration. "WHY ME?! WHY NOW?!"

A final desperate scanning of my surroundings was attempted at midday this day...I found a cavern...the darkness began to swallow me as I entered...why I entered I do not know...I could not think, there was only the trail through the cold and damp abyss...ahead of me...forever...am I mad? Am I losing my common sense? Have I already gone insane?!

My flare illuminated the eerie tunnel...I moved onward...

onward...

onward...

onward...

I reached a different place...so I had not been traversing in circles. A lake...a dead end...yet what caught my attention was the fire, still ablaze, still crackling...

With as much speed as humanly possible I trudged through the murky body of water...sounds of the creatures of the dark greeted me...

and then the thing struck me, sending me hurtling through the water...I fought it...it writhed whether in fear or hatred I could not tell...

It saw me...and retreated above the surface...I would find the little wretch...I could smell its fear...

I rose above the surface...I began to cackle unnaturally as I fired rounds from my rifle into the cave cieling...the creature was illuminated in the flashes and it retreated...the cracking echoes spread throughout the cavern...I found it and advanced as I caught it in the light of a flare...I hacked away its mask only to find...a face...a young face...the face of a girl...we stared at one another and my body became limp from shock and uncertainty...

I came to my senses and offered it words of comfort...she felt the wall behind her...I could see the fear in her eyes...



Whether hours passed or minutes, the two of us left the cave...was this a wonderful dream? I gazed upon the sky with hope gleaming in my eyes...the sun parted through the clouds...

Commentary:
This was built in several dioramas. I'm fairly satisfied with the builds. It took, I'm guessing two nights to complete this chapter...heh heh, this was built nearly a month ago...a little last minute posting...

Behind the scenes:




Shell.



Comments

 I like it 
  December 9, 2008
I missed this by a LONG shot...Great job, though!
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  September 21, 2008
Awesome pics ! You could give Sir Nadroj a lesson on how to build and take great pics !
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  September 18, 2008
Oh no! I missed it! Brilliant MOC man. "Will Scott...the legacy of Elnickre." =)
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  September 6, 2008
I'm really starting to become a big fan here. Your builds are all quality and your writing skills just improve with every chapter. Can't wait for your moctag and good luck in the MocOlympics which are getting started later today (shameless self plug there...). Keep it Blocky ~ Chrispy (how did I let Heather talk me into that?)
 I like it 
  September 6, 2008
Great Job, mate! You've improved a lot! I love the snot road. The walls looks great too. I am following this story since part 1 so i cant wait to see more from you! Keep it bricky, lad!~Joris
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  September 6, 2008
Working on this and a MOCtag at the same time... as long as you can keep your stories straight. This would be the relaxed one, with no sarcastic rules nazi peering over your shoulder!
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  September 5, 2008
dude! this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  September 5, 2008
this is a high level MOC my friend... great story with a great build as well... really scary story... for a while i felt that i'm watching a movie!!! well done buddy... keep it up.. peace.. fofo
 I like it 
  September 5, 2008
Nice job. Glad to see another MOC from you.
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  September 5, 2008
Dude, as usual your MOCs are well made and great! anyway can you check out my Ohh that Phong Chang series? that'd be great man!Keep it SNOTTY!~Alex
 
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