This is the first chapter of my new comic: The truth wins!...Commander Fox, commander of the Coruscant Guard, have a special mission on the planet Sacoshi, who is in the Other Rim. The chancellor ask him to destroy a Droid factory there. The story beginns...
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Fox: Crap. My instruments are defective. I have no idea where I am. Stupid storm!
Fox: Yes, sir!
Chancellor: Where are you! The sensors are defective! You must stay on your route! The communication is poor. Reports back to me when you're back.
Fox: Ah. The factory. Huh? Count Dooku and some droids. But who is the other? I can not hear them. I think they argue, is not it? Maybe I can with my helmet camera hear them...
Guy: It is wrong! The chancellor uses the Seperatisten for his plans from an empire out! I can not bear! My army is against the Republic AND against the CIS !!
Count Dooku: You're stupid!
Guy: Master! I'm your apprentice, but you do the wrong thing!
Dooku: I don't say more!
Fox: Interesting...I must tell the Jedi about that...
Guy: Stop! Naive clone! You have luck when Dooku didn't see you.
Fox: What do you tell about the chancellor!
Guy: ?...You're not a normal clone...you can think.
Fox: Yes and i would like to hear about the chancellors plans.
Guy: You cannot run away. That you know... Why you're ask me that?
Fox: If it is true i must fight with the Jedi against the Republic.
Guy: The Jedi know the plan from the chancellor. They help Palpatine.
Fox: OK...I'm commander Fox and who are you, if i may ask?
Guy: I'm Dooku's apprentice, Darth Quo Gen Quin.
Quo Gen: I think you're on my site. Come on to my "home".
Fox: Home? Isn't here the factory?
Quo Gen: No. It is two miles east.
Fox: Yet i understand. The chancellor say that i must be on my route. He had Anxiety that i could find you.
Quo Gen: See. That is the evidence for the chancellors plan!
Fox: I try to give my best to convince a few clones.
Quo Gen: Yes and I try to convince a few leader of the CIS.
Fox: We'll defeat the Jedi and the chancellor, so we'll make a new Republic!
Quo Gen: Oh. It is better when you go now. I destroy the factory and you can tell the Chancellor that you've finished your mission.