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due to an intellegence report,the toa found the location of the most powerfull members of the hunter clan.so,the most powerfull toa,shadow,takunuva,and makuta,set out to capture them.they arrive and hide behind a rock."lets rock and roll!"said takunuva."wow,what a cliche."said makuta.they went in,guns blazing,into the crowd.


takunuva stepped on paracite like a bug.






makuta tied-up slithers tenticle into a knot.



shadow created a nightmare in pinser that made him spaz.



in the pile of the minions parts,stood carnage with a grin on his face."give it up carnage,your out numbered and out matched"said shadow."hahahahahaha,FOOLS!"laughed carnage,"i might be out numbered,but i am not out matched!"

a huge black and red tornado formed under carnage and the fallen minions.and what came out,was something from hell its self:toal chaos carnage.




it was a fusion of carnage and the minions



makuta was down first.




shadow tried to run,but it was too late.






finally,takunuva was pinned down under carnage."you toa are weak,this is what real power looks like!"roared carnage."your wrong sniper!"said takunuva."dont ever call me that,sniper is dead,and soon,all toa will too"





all of a sudden,a bright light flashed out of takunuvas mask."feel the power of light!"screamed takunuva.carnage was dazed from the flash,that was takunuvas que.he jumpped and stabbed carnage with his light swords.




there was a bright flash.carnage and the minions returned to their normal selves.they were knocked-out.



takunuva walked over to carnage and tried to purify him.






carnage woke up."whats happening to me?"said carnage.his body started to turn silver."i will be back,you hear me,i will be back!!!"screamed carnage.those were his final words.





there was another flash.and there was a figure.






it was sniper.


sniper ran off,he was no where in site.

so,the toa enemy is destroied,mostly.the captured minions were turned back and released.all is right with the world.

or is it?



Comments

 I like it 
  January 2, 2012
This is so awesome! Great Suspense! Can you check out my page and give me some comments? link: http://mocpages.com/home.php/54664
  March 4, 2011
AWESOME!!!!!Whats with hunter at the end?You rule!!
Shadowgear 6335
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Casey Miller
  February 23, 2011
Dude yur mocs are sweet. if you could check out some of my mocs that would be sweet tell me what you think of em and if u could give me some pointers.thx and sorry fur bugging you. :)
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  January 9, 2011
this is great please check out my seiries http://mocpages.com/moc.php/241832
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  July 16, 2010
dude thats better than my cheese story. your story makes mine look like a childs book.in other words that was brilliant
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  June 19, 2010
that was a really good story.
 I like it 
  June 16, 2010
awsom !!!!!
  February 23, 2010
you are awesome I'm glad I found you on you tube
  September 25, 2009
CARNAGE IS AWESOME!!!!!
  September 4, 2009
shadow gear your real name is brendan barado?!
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  September 4, 2009
cool join my group you have not excepted it yet shadow!
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  August 5, 2009
carnag looks like a mutated toa. nice story.
  February 17, 2009
youknow how you said you dont know what to do with agori and matoran pices? use them to make agori and matoran or make them a rahi
 I like it 
  February 14, 2009
Dude, you're good :) I like your character design. Come visit me http://www.mocpages.com/home.php/21064
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  October 25, 2008
that was cool great :}
Shadowgear 6335
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Man eating tomato FTW
  October 11, 2008
nice check out my the legend of toa eloy part 3
 I made it 
  October 11, 2008
R.I.P hunter clan
 I made it 
  October 11, 2008
okay i will
 
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