While traveling back to a rebel outpost on the planet Geonosis, the Millenium Falcon experiences a mechanical breakdown and crash lands on one of the asteroids surrounding the planet. Meanwhile the Imperials are searching for the Millenium Falcon. It won't be long until they are found....
Han Solo walks out of the Falcon and surveys the area
Han Solo "Luke stay snd guard the ship with 3PO and R2
"I see two coming this way, take cover" says the rebel soldier
they take cover behind the rocks
Two clone troopers come running up to them.
red clone "we're friendly!"
they drop their weapons and put their hands up.
green clone "just let us talk to you!"
Han Solo "alright fine"
green clone "our ship crashed here during the Clone Wars"
red clone "all our communications were down so we couldn't get to the fleet"
"anyways, we think you can rebuild your ship, come with us"
the group runs off
the group arrives at the crashed ARC-170
green clone "we can bring these pieces back to your ship to rebuild it"
red clone "I'll go get R4"
They walk up to the shelter and call the droid
They run to the other side of the starfighter
The group works in pairs for carrying back the pieces to the Millenium Falcon
When they get back to the ship Luke is waiting for them
Luke "The scanners indicate Imperial ships coming this way"
Han Solo "hurry up we need to get out of here"
They quickly put the sheets of metal in place
R2-D2 welds them in
The last piece is put in.
Just then a TIE fighter hurtled right past the Falcon
Han Solo "I think it's time we go now"
The run back to the ship
Rebel Trooper "hurry!!!"
The ship takes off
Han Solo "that was a close one"
Unfortunately the TIE Interceptor follows the Falcon
C-3PO "were doomed"
Han Solo "somebody man the turret!!!"
The Millenium Falcon fires its guns at the TIE.
The laser hits the ship
Rebel trooper manning the turret "right on"
The TIE blows up. The Millenium Falcon speeds off to Geonosis.
this is good, i love the twist with the stranded clones not to metion how cool they are! a prequel to explain a little backstory for the clones would be nice. and is this the end, i wanna see more!!! would you be my ally, i love your work!!! and please see my comics for superman!
Great story, but like the other people, I wonder how exactly the clones managed to survive for around 22 years without food or water? Anyway, Great looking scene and intresting welding technique (hey if he can fly why can't he weld?).
very good and all, but. WHERE DID THE REBEL TROOPS COME FROM?, we saw Han come out of the ship only, and also, how did the clones survive 18 or more years stranded, without food or water, AND they would have died of old age because of the growth acceleration. Maybe put a little more backstory in, like where they found the water etc, or as it was an asteroid, there wouldn't have been any. I'm NOT trying to insult you, but a little more info and pics wouldn't hurt.