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AoT Tournament Round#1: Delta 9 Jedi Starfighter
AoT round #1
About this creation

Rear engines

landing gear

cockpit

Pilot- Tom Jaineo

Vehicle Profile

Name: Delta 9 Aethersprite class starfighter

Creator: Kuat Engineering Systems, Coruscant

Length: 7.6m

Width(wing to wing): 7.4m

Affilation: Galactic Republic

Pilot: Tom Jaineo

Weaponary: Wing blasters, rockets

Other features: Opening cockpit, hyperdrive engine(no need for booster ring), quick repair system and durable body(no need for astromech droid unless the pilot wishes otherwise)

Other Info: Kuat Engineering failed to impress the Jedi with the Delta 8 and they had already started work on the Eta-2. However, some Jedi did not like the Eta design, so the Delta 9 was made, inspired by both freighters and airspeeders.



Character Profile

Name: Tom Jaineo

Full Name: Tomochus Veridan Shi-Jain'eo(Well, if my name was that long, I'd shorten it too!)

Age: 19(Born 38 BBY)

Hair color: Dark Brown

Eye color: Hazel

Home Planet: Danon

Jedi Rank: Jedi Knight(hair is still quite short as he only recently had his Padawn braid clipped)

Jedi Clan: Bear Clan

Jedi Master: Koron Slumo, Yoda(When he was a youngling)

Lightsaber color: Orange

Other Info: Tom was handed over to the Jedi aged 5. He was top of his class at memory skills, lghtsaber training and piloting. When he became a Jedi Knight, he had become fond of his Delta 7 starfighter but he was aware of it's faults. He didn't like the small, squat Eta-2s along with many other Jedis. When the Delta 9 came out, he was sure it was the starfighter for him. He wore a complex white flight suit as he was in space for most of his missions, he was a better pilot than Plo Koon(according to everyone except Plo himself)! He also wore a podracing helmet in space, it was a birthday gift off his friend Anakin Skywalker whose love of podrcing he shared. The helmet was extensively modified to make it fit for space, with extra padding and a comlink device. His home planet, Danon, was second only in buissness to Coruscant and it wasn't ideal for a young child to be brought up in, with endless assassinations by both bounty hunters and civillian terrorists. Tom returned to Danon aged 17 to find his parents burning in their apartment. Tom rushed in, but he couldn't save them. The bounty hunter Zam Wesell stood outside, looking content with herself. Tom leapt after her as she climbed into her airspeeder. He got out his lightsaber, but it had been severed by the flames. Filled with rage and hate, he used his bare fist to shatter the airspeeder windscreen and cluctch Zam's throat. He grabbed Zam's blaster and pointed it at her head. All of a sudden, the airspeeder accelerated and Tom was flung off. Tom swore to have revene on the assassin and his new lightsaber was made orange, the color of the flames that killed his parents and it was a constant reminder of his hate for Wesell. It seemed that Count Dooku had organised the assassination to try and turn Tom to the dark side, as Asajj Ventress proved incompetent at Jedi assassinations and Tom was very powerful.

Yes I know that Tom isn't my sigfig, but Heather Middlehurst(me as a Jedi) already has The Storm Glider.

My opponent is Elite Commando Xela, here is his entry: Xela's entry

Elite Commander T Fett points: 50/60

Elite Commander CC-7576 points: 48/60

Elite Commander Fed points: 60/60

Total points: 158/180


I know this could have been a lot better, but due to personal reasons, I only had half an hour to build and upload it. I have edited this hugely, it is longer, much more detailed and it has a droid socket and republic logos. Tom Jaineo looks a lot better now. Unfortunately though, due to the contest rules, I am unable to change my entry but I will still upload it later.



Comments

 I made it 
  February 9, 2009
Quoting Crimso Giger This isn't very complicated, it's a fact, but still it's really enjoyable and eye-catching. Nice shape and colors, well done !
Thankyou, but this is quite old, look at my V2 of it and my ECA RazorNose please!
 I like it 
  February 9, 2009
This isn't very complicated, it's a fact, but still it's really enjoyable and eye-catching. Nice shape and colors, well done !
 I like it 
  December 11, 2008
WOOOOOOOOO!!!
 I like it 
  December 8, 2008
Hey Miggy! I like the star fighter a lot. The reason I haven't been posting anything is because my uploading wire broke so I cant upload anything on my page. My next creation will be corasaunt.
 I like it 
  December 8, 2008
I agree with cc, 50/60 ~ECTF
HTHR Z00
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Elite Commander CC-7576
  December 7, 2008
First: Im a judge, so I can judge like I think it is right and 2nd this <Jedi is to simple, the body from a figure from the B-Wing and the head is standart, so it is uncreative, if you cant belive than look at some other entry, theyve got better Jedis. No offense, but that is the truth.
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  December 7, 2008
i know its wierd to ask but r u my ally? btw if ur not can u be my ally?
 I like it 
  December 7, 2008
Looks nice, like an Arwing from Star Fox kinda. Good color shceme. Cool landing gear. I'll check out Xeala's now.
HTHR Z00
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Elite Commander CC-7576
  December 6, 2008
Nice work, but you should try to get a more studless looking at the wings.
HTHR Z00
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Elite Commander CC-7576
  December 6, 2008
Ill judge later, in the moment Im playing GTA 4 online. Thats so coooooooool!
HTHR Z00
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Elite Commander CC-7576
  December 6, 2008
Judgeing: The Jedi gets a 6 of 10 (exept of his lightsaber he isnt special and I cant see so much good ideas at his looking), for the starfighter Ill give 16 o 10 points (the wings are to wide that destroys the good looking of the front completly and you hant used the room under the wings for e.g. rockets or cannons), for the color a 9 of 10 (it is ok,but not prefect), for the detail Ill giver you a 8 of 10 (where are this typical detail pieces? Nowhere.), for story Ill give you a 5 of 5 (long story, tells a lot about him, good work), for my opinion Il give you a 4 of 5 (look at the top, there are enough reasons). Final points: 48 of 60.
HTHR Z00
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Elite Officer:Michael Sloper
  December 6, 2008
This is pretty cool and the shape is original but good. Great job! Also i made the next part of "Brothers in Arms" check it out.
HTHR Z00
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Elite Officer:Michael Sloper
  December 6, 2008
This is pretty cool and the shape is original but good. Great job! Also i made the next part of "Brothers in Arms" check it out.
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  December 6, 2008
Cool, I like the blue and gray colors. It could use a little more detail.
 I like it 
  December 6, 2008
Now I get it, yeah, I think they should work their way up also!
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  December 6, 2008
hey.. il soon have my round 1 moc-off entry up... u r one of the judges... so piz... wen u judge... u must tell me how good it is on a scale of 1 to 10... ok! and u have to do that to my competitors entry wen it is up...
 I like it 
  December 6, 2008
Hmm....nice job! The design is simple, yet effective.
 I like it 
  December 6, 2008
Awesome! I like it! I thought you told me that you did not like contests? Please respond!
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  December 6, 2008
very nice i thikn you will win your round.oh and the decals if yuo copy and paste them onto something ike paint are they the right size for the troops because my dad says they arnt
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  December 6, 2008
nice work! it looks really fast.
 I like it 
  December 5, 2008
Cool! I really like how the wings extend out like that! Thanks for commenting on mine!
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  December 5, 2008
this is great. I like the color and nice fig.
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  December 5, 2008
Nice Job. We'll be judging on the due date!
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  December 5, 2008
dang u r good o well lets just say they were desperate.
 I like it 
  December 5, 2008
I thought about that but i didnt think it was important besides the council was desperate for jedi hey ahsoka is 14 she joined. tell me if that works out
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  December 5, 2008
I noticed that right after I posted that! And I was too lazy to do it again.
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  December 5, 2008
Cool i will be posting mine to do u mind if i use your idea of a failed delta 8 design like mine was one of the prototypes that failed and it fell into my hands is that alrightwith u?
 I like it 
  December 5, 2008
cool! first comment!
 
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