This is my entry for Elite Commander Feds contest.
About this creation
Affiliation: Galactic republic
Type: Hera 4 intergalactic starfighter
pilot: Oxin Leiko
History of pilot- Oxin Leiko was taken as a Jedi padawan when Master Seasa Tin found him . His family had been masacred by the Bando Gora cult worshipers. He was seriously crazy when Master Tin found him. With alot of dedication and hard work, Tin was able to get him out of his trance. Then Master Tin thought it best for him to be a Jedi because Oxin had, literaly, nothing left. After some time, Oxin was noticed for his exptional use of visions. He could make others see things that would make them claw out their eyes. This greatly concrned the council so master Yoda had a "master-padawan" talk. He acknowledged His mistake and tried to not use visions. He proved himself worthy and was made a Jedi knight. He became a great warrior. Able to master anything he proposed himself to do. Although sometimes,rarley,but sometimes, he couldnīt help putting horrible visions on those he ....hated... most....
This is my Jedi starfighter for Elite Commander Fed Trinity contest.
Judgeing: For the Jedi Iīll give you a 10 of 10 (painted stuff is everytimes great and this one is totally great), for the Starfighter Iīll give a 19 of 20 (cool, but some parts at the front could need work), for the color Iīll give a 10 of 10 (grey, red and darkgrey, good work in bringing them at the ship, so all in all 10 of 10), for the detail Iīll give a 9 of 10 (more detail at the wings would be nice), for the story Iīll give a 5 of 5 (good written, cool story so nice work), for my opinion Iīm giving a 5 of 5 (it is a nice ship and a fantsatic Jedi). Final points. 58 of 60