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The Nidahk Chronicles Part 10
Part 10!
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Location: Karda Nui

Nidahk, Notuka and Fernax are still dazed from the sudden attack by Gohrnahrak. They have traveled through the swamp for a long time, but they still haven’t found Dahkurahk (or any other Makuta, for that matter). Suddenly, some bushes rustle.

Fernax: “Wait! What is that?”

A large Rahi comes out of the bushes. A Matoran is sitting on it’s back.

Matoran: “Who are you?”
Nidahk: “I am Nidahk. This is Notuka, and that is Fernax. Who are you?”
Matoran: “My name is Lesuva, and this is Padook.”
Notuka: “You live in a village around here, right?”
Lesuva: “Yeah. Me and the other remaining villagers.”
Nidahk: “...Remaining?”
Lesuva: “Yes... A lot of the villagers have been kidnapped by the Makuta. There’s only four of us left...”
Notuka: “Can you take us to your village?”
Lesuva: “Sure. This way!”

After traveling for about half an hour, they reach a small village.

Lesuva: “Here we are! Vihdaki, can you open the gate?”

A Matoran appears on a village wall and opens the gate.

Vihdaki: “Lesuva, who are these people?”
Lesuva: “They’re Toa. Their names are Nidahk, Fernax and Notuka.”
Vihdaki: “Hi, I’m Vihdaki.”

Some other Matoran approach.

Lesuva: “There are Nivtahk and Lidahku. Guys, here are Toa Nidahk, Notuka and Fernax.”
Nivtahk: “Hello.”
Lidahku: “Hi!”
Notuka: “Vihdaki, why do you look so different from the rest?”
Vihdaki: “Well, I was...”
Lidahku: “HELP!”

Everyone turns around. They see that a big part of the village is destroyed, and Lidahku is nowhere to be seen.

Lesuva: “What happened?!”
Fernax: (points in the distance) “Vahziki happened.”
Nidahk: “Did she kill Lidahku?!”
Nivtahk: “No... She kidnapped him...”
Notuka: “Lesuva, you and the others stay here. Me, Fernax and Nidahk will go after Vahziki.”

The Toa leave the village. While Lesuva is watching them leave, Vihdaki walks up to him, with a strange rock in her hands.

End of Part 10

Lesuva riding Padook

Vihdaki

Nivtahk



Comments

 I made it 
  April 14, 2011
Quoting chopper skull agreed! i think there are way too many characters in the story, and it moves too quickly, but hey, great story! You deserve more fans!
Thanks! I agree with what you say, but TNC was the first series I ever wrote. So it's not really shocking that it's flawed.
 I like it 
  April 14, 2011
agreed! i think there are way too many characters in the story, and it moves too quickly, but hey, great story! You deserve more fans!
Skorp TS
 I like it 
Duncan Life( TSC Knight)
  December 8, 2008
The guy is riding the Best rahi i have ever seen
 
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