This is the 2nd episode of my batman comics. It's kind of short and there's not too much action but it introduces some characters and sets the stage for the rest of the season.
About this creation
10 minutes after the last issue Batman walks into the batcave.
He's surprised to see alfred.
Batman: Ah, Alfred can you order some pizza, I'm starv
Alfred (interrupts): Master Bruce I shall order your pizza but there's a problem at the bank. The bat computer started beeping 5 minutes ago.
Beep Beep
Batman: The bank? Too classic.
Batman: I'll take a look at the security cameras 5 minutes ago.
Alfred: No can do Master Bruce, they cut all the power to the bank but it just went back on.
Batman: Dang, well I'll look at the security cameras right now.
Alfred: Oh My Gosh!
Batman: Computer, zoom.
Alfred: Who would have done this- HA HA HA, Why so serious?
Batman:Computer, zoom on the body.
Batman: Disturbing. Alfred whoever did this is no mere thug, I'd say we're dealing with a Crazed Psychopath.
Batman: I've got to get to the bank, there's no telling what he could do to more innocent people.
Alfred: Oh do be careful Master Bruce, I'll still order that pizza.
Batman: Good, I'll take the batpod. I want to attract as little attention as possible.
Vrooooom!!!
Alfred: Ha, little attention SURE.
Batman exits the batcave,
and starts going through the streets of Gotham.
Kid: It's Batman!!! Woohoo!
Woman: We should get out of here Caillou.
Batman: A bald kid named Caillou, disturbing.
Vroom!!!
Batman: The bank, might as well ride in.
Batman: Who would do this to the walls? HA, what the heck?
Batman: He's dead, and why would he do that to his face?
Batman: I have to find this creep.
BANG
Joker: Hi Batty! Took you some time getting here.
Thanks to videogamer838, Avranor, and Josh LaFollete for decals
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the next issue is up now.
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January 4, 2009 |
Ya, I honestly wasn't too happy with the first one either. |
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| Timothy Mably January 3, 2009 |
Not the best. I didnt like the first episode, to Tim Burtonish. |
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my next season is up. please check it out. |
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January 3, 2009 |
Thank you for adding the link. |
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my contests are on the Official Homepage of the Superman Comics. There are two contests and a championship contest for the winners of the first two contests. |
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Elite Ops: Michael Sloper January 2, 2009 |
I made the next part of "Brothers in Arms" check it out. |
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January 2, 2009 |
i uploaded your last edited comic for you to take. please check it out immediatly. |
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January 1, 2009 |
the blad kid was pretty funny. please check out superman justice 10 and my contest at the group. |
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Galactic Commander: Deviss- E.O.T.S.C General December 31, 2008 |
How do you invite people to your group? |
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December 29, 2008 |
I have seen all of the Mithias series and Matimeo series and I am reading a red wall book called "The Bellmaker". |
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Michael Sloper December 28, 2008 |
Do you thing you can change my name back to Michael Sloper. |
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December 28, 2008 |
please check out superman justice issue 8. you commented when it wasny finished. i dont have the official batman either and was hoping for one on christmas. oh well i did get some nice indiana jones and castle sets. |
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Elite Officer:Michael Sloper December 26, 2008 |
I made the next part of "Brothers in Arms" check it out. |
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December 25, 2008 |
Bad News- I didn't get a batman for christmas. However, I did get alot of castle legos. |
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December 24, 2008 |
It's fine, I'm hoping to get an official one for christmas. |
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December 24, 2008 |
Nice job! The story line is great. But once again I shall recomend getting an official Batman mask, and you can get one in the Batman and Mr. Freeze set for like five bucks. not that your mask is bad or anything, it's a nice attempt, I just think LegoŽ's are just a bit better. |
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Elite Officer:Michael Sloper December 23, 2008 |
Awesome! I love the custom made Joker It's WAY better then your Batman. |
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December 23, 2008 |
hey is joker pink? i know purple is very rare. i use up my only purple i have for him. just to tell you superman justice issue 7 is up. check it ot when you can. |
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December 23, 2008 |
Good job! I can't wait for the rest of the season. |
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December 22, 2008 |
i posted superman justice issue 6. please check it out when you can. when do you upload the next issue? |
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Elite Officer: Deviss December 21, 2008 |
(saying in a horse,creepy way)Why so serious? |
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December 21, 2008 |
please check out superman justice, issue 5 |
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December 21, 2008 |
Awesome! |
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December 21, 2008 |
i posted some batman villain decals if you want them. i hope they come in handy. please check them out when you can. |
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December 21, 2008 |
very good. it gives the good dark feel for batman. i like it more than the previous. my joker looks really wierd but i could give yo decals anyway if you want. you did the joker well too. not to creepy, not too funny. perfect. |
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December 21, 2008 |
Ya, I forgot to say, I added the Ha ha ha and face and why so serious by using this Dark Knight application thing for ipod. |
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