This is my entry to the second round of the Aot tournament.
About this creation
A long time ago in a galaxy far far away...
During the clone wars the republic detected suspicious movements around mustafar. They then sent the 320th legion and the 91st Elite legion under control of jedi Knight Zax-Olin to investigate. Little did they Know what awaited them...
Commander Zed:"Well men it looks like so far so good, I hope it is the same for the 320th."
Commander Zed:"Men get to work on those computers, after this room we only have one more left."
Clones of the 91st elite:"we're on it!"
(door to observation platform opens)
Jedi Zax-Olin:"What the..."
Darth maul:"so looks like the republic dicided to drop by. It will be my pleasure to deal with you."
jedi Zax-Olin:"I will take car of him men, I sense more danger is nearby."
Darth Maul:"You think you can destroy me, I am even more powerful then before. After my fall to the bottom of theed generator the only thing that kept me alive was my desire for revenge. I managed to find the seperatist and then they are now helping me get my revenge."
Jedi Zax-Olin: Everyone thought you we're dead but thy do not need to worry for I will deal with you."
Darth Maul:"So you say!"
(Darth maul knocks the lightsaber from the jedi's hand's)
(commander Fed runs in)
Commander Fed:"close the doors"
Commander Zed: what are you doing here.
Commander Fed: I got seperated from the rest of my legion and then I ran into droids"
Commander Zed: we are going to have to fight the droids so open the door."
Commander Fed:" Fire!"
Commander Zed:"good job men they are getting what the deserve."
Commander Fed:"Drodika, Close the door"
Commander Zed:"Pilot tend the wounded and meanwhile we need to find a way to destroy the droidika"
Clone trooper:"I have an idea"
Commander Zed:"good job, when I open the blast door fire"
Commander Fed:"nice shot,I think that is all of them"
Commander Fed:"Zed,how about you take a troop and investigate the last room, I will stay here just in case."
Commander Zed:"we will do that"
(darth maul force pushes Zax-Olin against the wall)
darth maul:"so this is how it ends, that was too easy."
jedi Zax-Olin:"we're not done yet"
(Zax-Olin force jumps)
(one side of darth maul's lightsaber gets destroyed)
darth maul:"it is my pleasure to continue but soon we must end"
(lightsaber battle continues)
darth maul:"It is time for us to end"
(darth maul force pushes Zax-Olin)
darth maul:"Goodbye jedi"
(Zax-Olin falls on to fallen rail)
Zax-Olin:"twisted by the darkside you are"
Zax-Olin:"now it is my turn to say goodbye"
(Zax-Olin knocks darth maul off the platform)
(darth maul lands on the rail but one of his robotic legs lands in lava)
darth maul:"I will return"
(rail floats away)
jedi Zax-Olin:"I better return now and see how my men faired"
commander Zed:"Well it looks like this room is okay,we better return"
(everyone meets in the control room)
Jedi Zax-Olin:"we better try to find darth maul he is still alive, he is a dangerous threat to the republic."
Commander Zed:"Fed, will you join us?"
Commander Fed:"I do not know I will consult with the rest of my legion"
Jedi Zax-Olin:"well then let us be off."
19 of 20 for size, 20 of 20 for story ( the return of darth maul was a good touch and it has all the stuff a good story needs!), Lightsaber battle 28 of 30 (Not the longest but still great!),Clones V.S. Droids 18 of 20, guest star 10 of 10. Overal: 95/100! Awesome job. I really like the build you got! We'll see you next round! ~ECTF
I like it
Elite Commander CC-7576
December 21, 2008
I love it!!! It has everything it needs, a story with the evil in itīs "best" form (Darth Maul wants revenge) and the built is awesome, too. The action has also a very high quality. This is really fantastic!!!