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AOT tournament comic entry: An Interupted Message
This is my entry for the AOT tournament round 2. On a distant secret moon of Mygeeto a battle is raging between the dwindling numebrs of clone troopers, and the massive droid army. The moon is wanted because of it's richness in minerals, and strategic importance. For whoever controls this moon controls the raw materials in this system. In a last ditch attempt to keep the moon in their grasp, the Clones under commanders Drake, and Fed are looking for a secret weapon rumored to be hidden on the moon. Little do they know it may take years to find, and unearth the weapon.
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Commander Fed has called a meeting of great importance in the forward command post. News has come fron the Excavation site, they say they have unearthed part of a large machine. Little do they know, the Droids are in on the super weapon rumors too.

Fed: i know you may be wondering why i called you all here today.
Drake: you're dang right i am, i was just about to get in on the action, and blow some clankers to bits. and then im called away from the front lines for a meeting!!
Falran: calm down drake. what fed has to tell us must be important. otherwise he would have left us alone.
Fed: Thanks Falran. As you can see on my holomap, the Seps outnumber us greatly. so we need to get that weapon out of there before the seps find the site.

Galactic Marine: SIRS!! i have an incoming transmission over our secure holonet.

Fed: Put it up soldier.
Galactig Marine: Yes sir!

Holotable: "BWEOOP"
Fed: what is it trooper.
Clone Trooper: Sir, we have unearthed part of the weapon, but...
Drake: Spit it out Trooper!!!
Falran: Mind your tone Drake.
Clone Trooper: Well sirs, we are now under attack by the Droid Army, and the outnumber us ten to one. Hold on one second.

Battle Droid: Die Republic scum!!!!! "Bdew"
Clone Trooper: HAHA!! Missed!

"Bdew"
Battle Droid: ARRG!

Clone Trooper: As i was saying, we are outnumbered and we need reinforcements.
Fed and Drake: We will try to send you help, but it may not arrive in time.

Battle Droid: Death to the republic!! "BDEW"

Galactic Marine: We've lost the transmission sir!
Fed: get it back! i want to know whats happening.
Galactic Marine: I'm trying sir! But the must have destroyed the relay system.

Galactic Marine: We've lost the transmission sir!
Fed: get it back! i want to know whats happening.
Galactic Marine: I'm trying sir! But the must have destroyed the relay system.

Drake: FED, FALRAN!! Look at the map!!

Fed and Falran: What is it!!
Drake: you see that green spot there?
Fed and Drake: yeah what about it?
Drake: thats where the excavation base is at, that green spot is their distress signal.

Fed: what the hell just happened!

Falran: either the beacon was destroyed, or the beacon was deactivated.
Drake: We better put the troops on high alert.
Falran: you are right Drake, we may be next.

Fed on loudspeaker: ALL TROOPS TO ALERT MODE RED!! THIS IS NOT A DRILL!! I REPEAT THIS IS NOT A DRILL!!!
MT-AW pilot: Yes sir!!!
Turret Gunner: Yes Sir!!
Falran: i hope we don't suffer the same fate as those at the excavation site did.

Turret Gunner: Sir, a small seperatist force is knocking on our frotn door!!
Drake: Well dont just stand there!! Blast em!

Turret: "BDEW"
Gunner: Dang i missed!

spider droid: "BDEW"

MT-AW Pilot: AARGH!!
KABOOM!!

Turret Gunner: SUCK THIS DROIDS!!
"BDEW"

KABOOM!!
Grevious: Damn it!!

Grevious: Take out that turret trooper!!

Rocket Mercenary: With pleasure sir.
"Fchoom"

Turret Gunner: OH CRAP!!!

"KABOOM"

Galactic Marine: SIR, we lost the turret and the walker!!!
Fed: Keep shooting!
"BDEW BDEW"

"Battle noises"

Merc Trooper: AARGH!!

Battle Droid: "BDEW"

Galactic Marine: AARGH!!

Grevious: Hold your fire troops! General Falran, i wish to have an honourable battle with you for the outcome of this battle.

Falran: Don't try anything stupid Grevious.
Grevious: i wont have to, i am better than you in every way.

Falran: We shall find out!!
"battle Begins"

Falran force jumps and stabs down, but is deflected.

Grevious: Give up, and i may spare your life you jedi slime!!

Falran slips his lightsaber behind Grevious's saber, and slices down.
Falran: Lets see how well this goes for you grevious.

Falran relieves grevious of one of his arms
Falran: it seems you have been disarmed Grevious.
(sorry, couldn't help it)

Grevious runs back to his troops
Grevious: RETREAT!!!

Falran: we may have survived this time, but we may not do so well against the next attack.
Drake: at least we survived at all.
Fed: Amen to that brother.
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Stats: This was build on a gray 32x32 baseplate, and a gray 16x32 baseplate

Elite Commander T Fett points: 90/100

Elite Commander CC-7576 points: 89/100

Elite Commander Fed points: 91/100



Comments

 I like it 
  December 23, 2008
You did a really good job, even if i won you should keep up the good comic building! this really was good, Im not just saying that to make you feel better.
Tyler Evans
 I like it 
Elite Commander CC-7576
  December 22, 2008
Judgeing: 17 of 20 for scale (the details are missing, the built isnīt impressive), the story gets a 17 of 20 (some things are really destroying a good story feeking (e.g. the "Galactic Marine") Come on that was a usual Snow guy, add some red arms, or such a stuff), the Lightsaber battle gets a 25 of 30 (to short and Grievous is shown much to weak, man this guy is the main leader of the sep. military, you are showing him much to weak!!!), for Clones V.S. Droids Im giving a 20 of 20 (good work, nothing much to say here), for guest Iīm giving a 10 of 10 (again Fed, our standart guest, still nice work). Final points: 89 of 100.
 I like it 
  December 22, 2008
thanks for congratulating me on winning but, i didn't win yet, so why do you think i did?
 I like it 
  December 22, 2008
Overal: 90/100! Great work. ~ECTF
 I like it 
  December 21, 2008
all I can say is WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!
 I like it 
  December 21, 2008
Hey good job did you here that i left the AoT look at the bottom of my homepage for some info on what happened.
 I like it 
  December 21, 2008
Good job, and good luck!
 
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