Hi! This is my 3rd comic. I EDITED THIS ONE. It's the first one that I myself have added the speech bubbles (In the 1st one Josh LaFollette added it). The next episode is going to be very very good. Constructive criticism is welcome.
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January 25, 2009 |
Call me the Joker! lol great stuff |
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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper January 19, 2009 |
Awesome comic! The dialog is good but try to use some of the lines from "the dark knight." Also can you check out my newest Moc. It's called Imperial Door Breaker. |
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And THANK YOU(!!!) for adding me as one of your favorite builders!! |
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Thanks, Patrick! I'll list you under my allies immediately. |
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Hey Patrick Do you want to be my ally. If yes, post it on my new Batman comic issue #2 |
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to clarify why superman beat batman in a sword fight without powers, the reason for superman's incredible skill has not yet been explained. it will be though. |
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Darman(WARNING! This name is patented. Any acts of copeing this name are illegel. Punishments are: 20 years in jail,community work for 30 years,or maybe even death. Have a nice day!) Due to the Witness Protection Agency (W.P.A), Darman's (Not real name) location is secretive. January 15, 2009 |
Like my new name? |
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January 15, 2009 |
Hey, Patrick. I just whizzed by here to asky if you wanted to be my ally? If you do, just comment on my latest creation telling me. Thanks! |
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January 14, 2009 |
When are you going to make issue 4
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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper January 13, 2009 |
Can you please check out my newest Moc. It's called "Old Friends." |
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January 12, 2009 |
When will number 4 be out? This is great! love all your mocs, and it's awesome that you can pull of Batman with no official sets! |
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January 10, 2009 |
mines shadowkatana. |
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January 9, 2009 |
hey nice editing and my enimie is the joker as well but thta wont be until i haev money(only a week or so)could you check otu my comic not the best so im gonna re edit it to make it better |
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Supreme Commando: Michael Sloper January 8, 2009 |
Can you check out my newest Moc. It's called the D-18 starfighter. |
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I made it |
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January 7, 2009 |
Don't worry about my comics being all Dark Knight, after the next episode it won't be too Dark Knightish. |
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what is wrong with the dark knight? thats what i use for my comics. |
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Timothy Mably January 6, 2009 |
Best one yet, but then again there has only been 3, lol. I didnt like the first one but please, PLEASE change some of your comics to another source other than The Dark Knight. Could I write an episode for fun??? :) |
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Galactic Commander: Deviss January 6, 2009 |
HE'S A SICK,SICK MAN!! |
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It's kind of good, when are you going to make the next issue. |
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January 6, 2009 |
very good. the editing is nice and the story is good too. nice work. |
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