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The Clone Wars Ep. 1: Ventress Captured!?!
This is the first episode in my new series. Hope you like it and enjoy!
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Mace Windu has been sent to inspect the new Clone Commanders work at succeeding at taking a seperatist base. They have a plan to do something dagerous, but will it succeed........



Master Windu's attack shuttle lands at the base.



Tyran: "Welcome master Windu. Are we still on for the plan?"

Windu: "Yes we are. Wait for my singnal."



Windu: "Do you hear that? Get down!!!"



Master Windu push's Tyran out of the way as the shuttle explodes.



Tyran: "Thanks General."

Windu: "Oh, no problem...." he says as he catch's his breath.

Tyran: "That wasn't part of the plan."

Windu: "We can still pull it off."

Tyran: "If you say so."



A trooper walks out of the wrekage.

Trooper: "Is there more survivers!?!"



Master Windu uses the force to move the cockpit out of the way.

Windu: "You alright Lutenient?"

Trooper: "Ya. Behind you! Clankers!"



Clanker: "We've got you out numbered!"

Tyran: "Well, did you not see the Jedi! We are more powerful than stupid clankers!"

Clanker: "We still out number you! We are more powerful. I think."



Ventress appears and shoves the cockpit on top of the trooper.

Trooper: "Ahhh!!! Help.... me!!!"

Ventress: "The droid was right. Lay down your weapons or prepare to die."



Windu: "We surrender Ventress."

Tyran and Windu put down their weapons.



Ventress: "Take them away!"

Droid Sniper: "Sir, what do we do with the injured one?"

Ventress: "Kill him."

Trooper: "NO!!!"



Sniper: "Ready, aim....."

Windu: "Now Tyran, NOW!!!"



Tyran attacks a droid, taking his blaster.



Tryan shoots a droid and Windu shoves the SBD in to the other three droids.



Tyran: "We have you out numbered! Stand down and surrender!!!"

Ventress: "You fool!"

Obi-Wan: "Tyran is right ventress."

Ventress: "What!"



Commander Cody, Fox, Plo-Koon, Ahsoka, Skywalker, and Obi-Wan show up.

Obi-Wan: "You have no choice Ventress. More forces are on there way."



Ventress lays down her weapons.

Ventress: "I surrender."

Windu: "Nice work Tyran."

Tyran: "Just doing my job sir."



Windu: "Take her away!"

Tyran: "Yes sir."

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Comments

 I like it 
  May 6, 2012
That was a great job you did!
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  July 21, 2011
Good work here! I would say that enviroment could be a bit less coloured and darker (I mean like gray and brown colours) Comic is really good, want to see more! : D
David .
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Andrew AKA Hump-Free
  April 10, 2011
Very Nice Comic, Couldn't Tell That It Was Your First.
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  March 29, 2010
i like the comic
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  October 13, 2009
Great job on the comic. You have alot of guys! I really liked it. Make sure to check out my creations.
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  May 27, 2009
you did really well. can you comment here? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/119788
 I like it 
  May 21, 2009
You've done a lot of work with a limited amount of background so points there. Not bad on the story either. For your next one, try to build a little more background if you can. Great start so far. ~ Chris.
David .
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Sander Van Lembergen
  April 7, 2009
THIS IS AWESOME !!!!!
  March 31, 2009
kewl
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  March 23, 2009
Nice first episode! Usually the first episode reaches out and pulls the viewer. This pulled me past the point of no return. (The point of no return thing is a song in The Phantom of the Opera.) Could we be friends? I also have a Clone Wars comic can you check it out?
 I like it 
  February 1, 2009
Cool story! Can't wait for more!
David .
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masterchief 1
  January 24, 2009
Nice. by the way, how come you did not rate my battle of the somme?
David .
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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper
  January 19, 2009
Awesome comic! I like the detail and the dialog is good. Also can you check out my newest Moc. It's called Imperial Door Breaker.
  January 19, 2009
Th scenery is great, but I don't like your overuse of Jedi and the concept that Clones are capable of mowing down legions of droids with no problem. The storyline can use some restructuring
 I like it 
  January 19, 2009
Awesome! Great detail, great job overall! Is the Shuttle good? P.S. You wanted to have a moc-off right? Well, i'm ready now.
  January 19, 2009
i love it you did an excellent job
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  January 18, 2009
Sorry to bother you, but have made that Ssyphin dude yet? I was very happy to hear you were gonna make one, and I can't wait for it to get uploaded.
David .
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CC-7576 "Rex"
  January 17, 2009
vid is up
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  January 17, 2009
This is very impressive. The amount of details is great! I like how you have the tweleve on the ground. as far as the commander name goes I think the one you have would be perfect or mabey someone elses names would fit nicely. frankly I can't think of any. weird huh. Oh well great job anyways. ~EARCTF
 I like it 
  January 17, 2009
This is great! I love reading other peoples comics!
David .
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CC-7576 "Rex"
  January 16, 2009
If you want to keep the name just keep it, its your name, by the way it is everytimes such a high honorar for me when someone says that Im his favorite builder. Thanks man. To C Rex: If your name is to long itz gets a short form at e.g. look at the main page and slook at my Fallout 3, you will read: "Fallout 3 Vignette by C "Rex" ", you can see C is the first letter of CC-7576 and "Rex" is the last part of my name, so if we see that in that way you are C "Rex", too. lol P.S.: Has 2412 to do with christmas? You know german date 24.12. .
  January 16, 2009
The clone wars TV Show and Lego sets are kind of odd sometimes, but great creativity!
David .
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CC-7576 "Rex"
  January 15, 2009
Hi, do you like my new avatar, or is it to dark? Oh and check out my newset MOC, please.
 I like it 
  January 15, 2009
Very Nice I like the scenery! Check my stuff!
 I made it 
  January 14, 2009
Quoting sergeant: Zio What type of paint did you use on ur sig fig?
Tamiya Acrylic Paint
 I like it 
  January 14, 2009
what paint did you use on ur sig fig?
David .
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Supreme Commander Michael Sloper
  January 13, 2009
Can you please check out my newest Moc. It's called "Old Friends."
 I like it 
  January 13, 2009
Oh, I saw your comment on Project Awesome Part 3. The peice that I used for the 3 guns is used in the MTT's droideka. It holds the legs on it. If that isn't helpful, I'll get you a picture when I'm feeling better.
 I like it 
  January 12, 2009
I like all the green. And on your accounts picture, the one with the battle droid pointing forward, I have an account on another website unrelated to this one with that same picture. Well, it is a good picture.
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  January 12, 2009
Great comic! hope to see more!
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  January 12, 2009
great work, the part where she was ambushed by all the Jedis had a real Star Wars fell to it
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  January 12, 2009
OMG!!that was awesome!!!
David .
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CC-7576 "Rex"
  January 11, 2009
Exellent, your new Clone looks really cool and you can be happy to have the shuttle.
  January 11, 2009
Cool! I like it! P.S.is the shuttle good?
 I like it 
  January 11, 2009
man i want the shuttle!! check out my mini shuttle! good job!
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  January 11, 2009
Very good.I liked it alot.
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  January 11, 2009
Bah, you basically copied off Fed's upcoming moc's name. It's pretty good though.
 I made it 
  January 11, 2009
Quoting Commander Hunter s pretty nice,would you say the shuttle is a good deal? - Hunter
It is a tad exspesive, but it is a nice set. My only complaint is the cargo bay can barely hold two people. But other than that, it is a nice set.
 I like it 
  January 11, 2009
Nice job. I like the detail in the scene.
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  January 11, 2009
hey,thats pretty nice,would you say the shuttle is a good deal? - Hunter
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  January 11, 2009
Saweet Bro, MAKE MORE!
 I like it 
  January 11, 2009
Better than many others!
 I like it 
  January 11, 2009
it is very good for your first comic. you have a great imagination!
 
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