This is chapter 2 of The Toa Juran. If you want a special effects version please say so in a comment.
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Hijuaro: Turaga you said you would tell me the prophecy.
Caldrad: Yes I did. Now please gather around. (All the matoran in the village gather around.) The prophecy states:
Long ago the evil Makuta Trivarn was sealed away. Then a time of prosperity came over Juran-Nui. That prosperity would not last forever as the Makuta would one day return to Juran-Nui to prepare for their master Trivarnís return. The island started to prepare to by creating the 6 legendary toas. When the toa where created they would band together to defeat the evil Makutas once and for all. And then a time of prosperity would then come over the land of Juran-Nui.
Hijuaro: So Iím one of those toas. But if I have to band together with the other toas where are they.
Caldrad: You must explore the island for them. They could be any whe..
Invoy: You donít have to search for the other stupid toa because youíre going to die right here right now.
Matoran 1: Itís an army of Creepers and Kirbis. Run!
Matoran 2: We canít run if Hijuaro dies then all of us will be killed by Trivarn.
Matoran 3: Ya I would rather die fighting for the toas then be massacred by Trivarn.
Rest of Matoran: Fight!!
Kalion: Die Makuta!
Invoy: Kribir. Take care of the runt and his pet toy.
Kribir: With pleasure master. Get down here you stupid runt.
Kalion: Ok but you asked for it.
Kalion then wrapped his chain around Kribir and hit him in the face with the claw.
Kribir: Get off of me runt.
Kalion: Never. Fire Aracnard!
Aracnard then fires 3 shots at Kribir. 2 miss but the third hits.
Kribir: Gaa. Get off!!
Kribir then snaps the chain and throws Kalion against a rock. Aracnard then jumps on top of Kribir.
Kribir: Umpf. Stinking pet.
Meanwhile Caldrad is busy fighting Crepar.
Caldrad: I may be old but I can still fight.
Caldrad then hits Crepar with his sword.
A beam of Fire, Earth, and Ground shot out of his gun and knocks Crepar back a bit.
Crepar: Ha. Die.
Crepar then shoots Caldrad, knocking him into the wall. Caldrad then gets up and jump at Crepar. He then cuts Creparís gun in halve. The two then start trading blows back and forth.
Invoy: Well since our friends are having so much fun why donít we get started donít you agree Hijuaro.
Invoy then starts cracking his knuckles when he disappears. He then suddenly reappears in front of Hijuaro who is just barely able to dodge Invoy.
Hijuaro then knees Invoy in the stomach.
He then jumps at Invoy and activates the saw in his shield trying to cut of Invoyís arm. He is unable to cut Invoy's arm off. Invoy just slams Hijuaro into the wall. While Hijuaro is recovering from being slammed into the wall Invoy hits him in the stomach hard enough to make him hack up blood.
Hijuaro: ah gla gla glaa haklgla (imagine coughing up blood noises)
Invoy: Ha!!! You were too easy to defeat. Now there will be one less toa.
Suddenly the shadow of a giant creature appears.
????: INVOY THE ORDER SENT ME HERE TO WATCH OVER THINGS AND NOT TO KILL YOU AND THE OTHER MAKUTA BUT IF YOU KILL HIM I WILL KILL YOU. AND LET ME TELL YOU YOUR DEATH WILL BE VERY SLOW AND VERY PAINFUL!!!!
Invoy: Retreat!!!!! I repeat all men retreat!!
All of the Creepers, Creeper-Kals, Kirbis, Crepar, and Kribir then started following Makuta Invoy out of the village as fast as they can. Then Hijuaro looks up at where the voice came from there was no one there.
Hijuaro: They were here for me. Iím sorry I need to leave the village so that it doesnít get attacked again.
One of the Matoran: But if you leave who will defend the village.
Hijuaro: Fine I will stay long enough to train some of you but I need to leave soon.
At the Makutaís cave.
Crepar: Invoy why did we retreat? We could have beaten them.
Invoy: I know but Axonn arrived.
Invoyís minions: AXONN!!!
Then a guy in the cave gets up.
???: So then Axonn is here. I guess I will get to have some fun.
The Creepers, Creeper-Kals Kirbis, Kribir, and Crepar then all bow.
Minions: All hail Makuta Terigra!!!
Invoy: I donít like to admit it but I guess you will have to fight.
Thanks Matt. And for every one the next few chapters will not have Hijuaro in them because it will be featuring the others becoming toas and their turagas telling them about the prophecy it will all be similar to this one unless i change my mind and make their prophecys different. also their will only be 2 guys that are turaga so far unless i build more
Very good story! So far you've got a good idea going and I look forward to seeing the search for the other toa! However I feel as though I'm not 100 percent immersed in the story yet. If you take more pictures and then work on the posing of your characters, you're story's will be even better than ever. But you are doing fantastic! Keep going!