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LRF Tales 1: Defeat on Munto Codru!
Credit goes to Will M for the "Swallow" idea. And John Moffats' freind Ben for the idea of this Tale! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Anyways! This is my first Tale so it may be to short or to boring or whatever BUT not to worry! Any Advice is welcome! Negative comments will be deleted!
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 I like it 
  May 25, 2009
Very good job. Just some constructive criticism, I thought the dialogue came off a little, like, stiff. People don't speak like that, they speak in fragments and slang, but still, great job.
 I made it 
  January 29, 2009
Quoting John Moffat Great work, and just saying, it was Ben who came up with the idea.
Oh Okay, thnks!
 I like it 
  January 27, 2009
Great work, and just saying, it was Ben who came up with the idea.
 
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