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Clone legacy: Ep. 1-Flight into terror
This is the story of Commander Elc and his allies. Here's some background knowledge. Elc is the leader of the group. (He's the one in the green.) His favorite choice of weapon: a lightsaber. When questioned how he came across this weapon he responds, "He was dead when I got there." Intended to be a joke, this usually gave him grunts or laughs from his troops. Next is Commando Hawkeye. (The one in red and with the sweet jet-pack.) When given any choice he uses a sniper. He almost never misses a target. Then there's Sharp. (Back-left.) There is no higher priority than speed and agility. (And when given chance, to do really sweet matrix moves.) : ) Last is Gnash. (Back right.) Death before dishonor. In another words, win or die. That's all you need to know, except... Don't forget to comment!
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Commander Elc's thoughts: It always seems to start this way. I'm sitting in a gunship, my weapons strapped on, wondering if this next battle will be my last. Maybe I'll live, maybe I'll die, it could all depend on 1 stray blaster bolt. Even now, my gaze strays toward my comrades, looking for their hidden feelings behind their visors, wondering if they are experiencing this same torture... If not, why? We are, after all, are more than brothers, we are the same. We are clones. Forever to be clones... We've been ordered to head down to the surface of this blasted planet, that I can't pronounce, and take out the separatists supposed "secret weapon". It's so "secret" that we don't even know what to blow up. (Gnash was more than slightly aggravated by that information.) I hope to survive, but even more-so, I wish my allies to survive. So here we are, us clones, feeling sick as we enter the atmosphere for more than one reason. I doubt we'll be battling much, if this secret weapon is just some shield generator or something, but that still doesn't make it easy to step out of these bay doors...



Commander Elc's thoughts: Here we are. On the surface. Few klankers, but still enough to get under-foot. Ah well, that's what we clones were made for. Blowin' up clankers.



1 standard hour later
Commander Elc reporting: Well, we've taken care of most of the droids in our area, but we've found no sign of this secret weapon.
---Pause---
*swears* New problem, Ventress herself just cursed us with her presence! This could get a LOT worse. I'll try to fend her off for awhile, give the commanders more time.





Commander Elc's thoughts: Here I am, locked in combat with Asajj Ventress, the infamous. Every move I make, she blocks. Every move SHE makes I'm forced to lose ground... This doesn't look good... Wait, Hawkeye's got me covered! Maybe, there's a chance...





Commander Sharp: Die klanker!!! *rolls*



Commander Elc's thoughts: Hawkeye managed to get a clear shot, but Ventress looked at him, JUST looked at him, and he crumpled to a heap, his blaster snapping like a twig... This is only getting worse.



Commander Gnash covering Elc, waiting for a clear shot.





Commander Sharp flipping and blasting the Klanker.



Gnash and Elc manage to fend off Ventress. She soon becomes exhausted.



Huge force leap over the tower.



Ventress doing a status report, requesting reinforcements.



Elc: We don't have much time. Ventress must be calling reinforcements. We should finish this well we have a chance. ' Hawkeye, you feelin' alright?
Hawkeye: Fine, just need a new blaster.
Elc hands over his secondary weapon.
Elc: Problem solved.



MWAHAHAHA!!!! THE SECRET WEAPO- what the- Sorry wrong picture... How'd that get there?
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Ventress: *Maniacal laughter* NOW FEEL THE WRATH OF-TITAN SP-!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All clones swear. *BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*
Sharp: Hey, the worst thing it could do is step on us.

-TO BE CONTINUED.... RIGHT NOW!!!



Elc nimbly jumps up the Titan to get to Ventress.
Elc: WE'RE NOT FINISHED YET, COW-!!!
*Ventress shrieks*
-ARD!!!!!!!!
Gnash and Hawkeye steadily make their way up SP, looking for anything that looks breakable.
Sharp: *Gets grabbed by Titan SP* Dang it! *Blasts crazily in all directions*









Gnash finally has found a shatter point. He blows half of the Titan up.



The Titan transforms his arm into a huge weapon of mass destruction.
Sharp: WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY???????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!





From the explosion Ventress and Elc fall-and fall-and fall-and-splat... They recover their footing then resume their battle.



Ventress does an unexpected force flip, to land a fatal blow to Elc.



Elc turns away from the swipe, but gets nicked, knocking his helmet off.



Ventress bares her teeth in a feral grin, than uses force lightning to knock down Elc.
Elc: GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Gnash: *Under his breath* Don't mess with the commander...





Gnash shoots. (Isn't that a sweet streamline?)



Ventress is knocked back from the explosion.



Ventress dazedly stands up, only to find Elc with a lightsaber to her throat, and Gnash with a missile launcher aimed at her face.



Hawkeye manages to blow the Titans head up.
Sharp: Heh, this thing is too slow!



Hawkeye: Hmmm, not a bad job...
Sharp: Yeah, but we took out that legion of assassin droids waaaaaay faster.
Hawkeye: True, but this time, I didn't have my sniper...
Sharp: A big gun doesn't make a big man.
Hawkeye: ... Hey, you ripped that off of someone!



Ventress force pushes Elc into Gnash.



Hawkeye and Sharp run to confront Ventress.



Titan SP makes several threatening explosions.



Ventress force jumps over them.
Ventress: I don't have time for this!



Elc makes a leap, grabbing his lightsaber back from Ventress.



Elc: Well men, a fine job you did.
Hawkeye: Thanks chief.
Sharp: No problem.
Gnash:.... WE WON!!!!!!! Hehehehe!



Elc gives a status report. -...no, I'm afraid Ventress escaped... We need a transport now. Soon? Good.



Commander Elc's thoughts: Well, somehow we all made it through alive. I wonder what mission will be awaiting us when we get back...



END
There will be a episode 2, but the more comments this receives, the faster it'll come!
: )



Comments

 I made it 
  March 17, 2009
Quoting Dax Olesa Very good story!
Thanks! = >
 I like it 
  March 16, 2009
Very good story!
 I made it 
  March 10, 2009
Quoting Matt The Backward One SWEET!!! Good vocabulary! Pretty funny too! I have a comic series, too! It takes place during the early dark times when the empire slowly demolishes the remaining Separatists battle droid army. If you have the time to take a look then I would be very grateful! (Although I don't think its as good as yours! :) ) Thanks. (http://www.mocpages.com/folder.php/42305)
Thanks! I'll check out your comic series, when I have a little time.
 I like it 
  March 9, 2009
SWEET!!! Good vocabulary! Pretty funny too! I have a comic series, too! It takes place during the early dark times when the empire slowly demolishes the remaining Separatists battle droid army. If you have the time to take a look then I would be very grateful! (Although I don't think its as good as yours! :) ) Thanks. (http://www.mocpages.com/folder.php/42305)
  February 25, 2009
i give it 15/15 for originality 6/10 for customs, 10/10 for story line, 15/15 for models used and 10/10 for characters used over all you got 56 out of60 i gave you a lower score on custom because you didn't color them or paint them.
 I made it 
  February 25, 2009
Quoting Commander Bear Here's your rating in the 702 legion contest, out of 60 Originality: 15/15 Customs: 5/10 Storyline: 15/15 Models used: 10/15 Characters: 5/5 I marked you off on customs because you didn't paint any guys. However, I still think that you did a great job on choosing a clone and customizing him without paint or markers. Total: 55/60 Great job!!
Thanks! I'm just about to post ep. 2.
 I like it 
  February 25, 2009
Here's your rating in the 702 legion contest, out of 60 Originality: 15/15 Customs: 5/10 Storyline: 15/15 Models used: 10/15 Characters: 5/5 I marked you off on customs because you didn't paint any guys. However, I still think that you did a great job on choosing a clone and customizing him without paint or markers. Total: 55/60 Great job!!
 I made it 
  February 22, 2009
Quoting Recon Commander Wolf (CC-1711) good but you need to make a custom LAAT
Thanks! Heh, yeah, I loved the way you made yours! I dunno if I could create anything quite as plausible though. Anyway, I'll give it a shot! Thanks for the comment!
 I made it 
  February 21, 2009
Kay, I'm going to create part 2 soon! I just don't have a camera right now, so it might be awhile...
 I like it 
  February 19, 2009
WOOOOO!
 I made it 
  February 17, 2009
Quoting Commander Roy cool tell me when next part is up!
Thanks! I will!
 I like it 
  February 16, 2009
Awesome job its really funny.
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  February 16, 2009
sweet job! can you comment on my moc's? (btw) do you have a mln (my lego network) account? thanks master luke
 
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