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THE DARK ONE!!!!!! -Read Full Story . THE DARK ONE!! Read description: . -[-=The Dark One=-]- Part 1 Haunting The dark one creeps quietly through the streets. His evil deeds unknown. He peeks into my window. He must be overthrown. He wears a cape as black as a starless night. His eyes are all that’s light. They're so gray, they cause much fright. What is he, who is he, where's he from? He won't tell me. How come? Look at all the evil he has done. Is there a way to defend? any help someone can lend? Time is running out, it’s almost the end. A war has begun, one that cannot be won. All I can do now is run. Part 2 Alone He haunts me night and day, I want him gone is all I have to say, I have to get rid of him some way. I am alone. I feel like he is eating me away to the bone. In this deep pit i have been thrown. Am i going to die? I feel like no one can hear my cry. You comforting me feels like a lie. Part 3 Daylight Help, i feel dead, all he does is fill me with dread. I can’t live like this, is all that has to be said. Can someone get me away from him? The moonlight is getting so dim, with fear; I'm filled to the brim. Go away... You cannot stay! Night is gone for ever now its day. Now, the sky is no longer gray. The dark one was just me. My eyes were closed so I could not see, but you have opened them... and now I'm free!

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