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Ripping Truths: Part 1 . The first part of my new comic...Caption for the picture is below each photo...Enjoy! . This story takes place after Catok's death in the old wreckage of the Karda Nui swamps. For more backstory to this, read Nexus's bio. In the Black Temple of the Brotherhood of Red Lightning. Nexus: Sigh...I-I can't believe he-he's gone... Nexus: I remember it too well... On Karda Nui, Catok has been bitten by a Shadow Leech...again. Catok! Oh-no! Catok, hold on, I'll get some help. Catok: Help me! I'm-I'm turning into one of theeeemm! Rorge: Nexus... Nexus: *Gasp!* Rorge! He-he's been bitten! Rorge: He's a Toa, Nexus, kill him. Nexus: But I-- Rorge: Nexus, we cannot afford to be charitable he's going to die anyway. Kill him...now. Catok: W-What are you doing!? Nexus: Argh!!! Nexus: Wha?...What have I done... Guard: Nexus, Rorge wishes to see you. Nexus: Oh, okay. Nexus: You wished to see me master? Rorge: Oh yes Nexus, and please, don't call me "master". Nexus: Did you need something? Rorge: Yes, Nexus. Are you feeling alright? You've been acting very strange lately. Nexus: Yes...yes master, I'm fine. Rorge: Okay, good. And please, don't call me "master". You're like a son to me. Nexus: Yes sir. Now the real reason I wanted you here was to send you on an assignment. The Toa have discovered a power source of some kind. Right now, they're in a battle with some Makuta at their base. Sneak in there, it should be easy since you're a Toa to them, and find out what this strange power source is and bring it to me. Nexus: Yes sir. *Crack!* *Boom!* At the Toa base. Brakix: Okay guys! Cut off his retreat! Cossy: Right! Ha ha! Where you going now you stupid cow? Butcher: ROAARR!! Ritix: WHUAAGH!! Cossy: Oof! Brakix: Oh, brilliant. Nexus: Ha ha! Toa VS Makuta, classic. Nexus: Now, what's in here? Nexus: Wha?...It can't be! To be continued... Well that's the first chapter! I hope you enjoyed it, this is my first Bionicle comic after all. Yes, I featured my brother's MOC again so I could use his Cossy mask. :P Please rate and comment!


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