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In the Name of the Jedi 1: betrayal . This is my first attempt at a comic. I was inspired by harry863s comics. . Kessel, three sandard hours after order 66 Jedi general Zayac Al'Sherah waits for his troops to retun from their mission. Zayac: "I hope the commander gets back soon so we can leave this backwater planet." Clone Commander: "General! The mission was a success." Zayac: "Good! Lets get out of here." The sniper takes aim... But he doesn't count on the rock that he trips on! Zayac turns around and realises that the shot was meant for him. Clone Commander: "Son of a gundark! Quick, get the jedi!" Zayac turns around just in time to begin defending himself from laser fire! Zayac begins dispatching men, starting with the downed sniper. As he dispatches the last trooper, Zayac hits the commander with a force push. With the clone commander handless and at his mercy, Zayac begins questioning him. Zayac: "Why did you try to kill me?" Clone Commander: "Order 66. The jedi have betrayed the republic. all jedi are to be eliminated." That being all that Zayac needed to know, he beheaded the clone. Zayac: "This is really bad. I have to let theother jedi know. The ones who have survived so far anyway."


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