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my first story . hello viewers this is my first ever story in this type so enjoy . Voxumo: Hello viewers and welcome to out first picture story. ??: Hey voxumo i need to talk to you Voxumo: ah Nili what do you need? NIli: give me a second to catch my breath. Nili: alright Voxumo on my way over i noticed 2 matoran being chased by 2 visorak. Voxumo: and what do you want me to do. Nili: Oh nothing i just thought you would want to see. voxumo: Where are they? Nili: look down there. Voxumo: Oh i see them now. At least they are holding there own. Nili: Yeah Niphinar: Ok bivar do you have any ideas. Bivar: Actually i do. Niphinar: ok what is it. Wisper wisper Bivar: when i say run run ok? Niphinar: alright. Bivar takes out a disk and throws it towards the visorak. Bivar: RUNNNNNN!!!! Bivar and Niphinar run away from the visorak After 5 minutes of running they stop in a desolute area away from the visorak. they then hunch over trying to catch thier breath. Niphinar: i think we lost them Bivar: yeah i'd agree Niphinar: so what was that disk anyway. Bivar: oh that was an artificial colony drone disk in short i threw visorak food. niphinar: Hey that was a smart idea Bivar: yeah well we might as well head out niphinar: that sounds like a good idea Visorak: He he he i'll be back Voxumo: Well that was interesting nili: i thought you would like that. nili: well i have to go. Voxumo: Ok Voxumo: well folks thats the end for today


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